All Comments on 'Lady in Red Ch. 19'

to be a fun read. Thanks.....

Bill Hardy better watch his ass or Steve Hammer will kick him so hard in his cunt that it will mess up the shine on his shoe!

Great story. I look forward to each new chapter!

Thank you for sharing it with us!

Keep it coming!!

Steve Hardy may be a bigger problem than the terrorist. They are similar in that they both work from ambush, but unfortunately while the damage he can do is terrible, it is difficult to find a permissible, non spinnable, adequate response..

Wonderful Story, i cant wait for the next episode.

Keep up good work

Each story is a gem in itself...a collection of jewels...a treasure chest!!!

Mild curiosity how wildly you will spin this fairy tale. I will be real disappointed if Steve doesn't single handedly defeat the entire Chinese army when they attack during a dance exhibition. Or maybe he'll just knock Gwen up with sextuplets, after they're married, of course. He will then deliver them himself after their plane crashes on a deserted island in the South Pacific, after he kills a tribe of 250 head hunters, of course. With a stick. Well, it was a really really sharp stick. Can't make it look too easy.

and make up detail? She hasn't missed as many days, but almost, including the previous week in LA?

since she was not in hospital and attended classes

stopped reading at page 2.. couldn't they just have sex and just not cum in the pussy, or just simple oral sex.. fucking shit story.. don't bother to continue your story sucks

It is a nice pleasant 1950s Mayberry. Just needs the whistling and for Beaver to appear.

Please be consistent. You had Steve's knowledge and thoughts when itvwas announced Jordan was staying with Gwen, then going to school with them as well. He was surprised and hated it. Then you switch 180 and he already knew of it and agreed it should happen.

It was written so long ago, of course it is like a 50s tv show.

I enjoyed Mayberry, even though it didnt get here till the 60s.

This is the third time I have read this whole story.

Every time I like it more. And this is my favorite author.

These stories have gotten five stars from about 90% of people reading them. So, anyone NOT liking them, is a person with a special agenda or interest

If you don’t like it, please don’t read it, and go away

How can Paula and Ted be introduced to Jordan,when Paula was at Macy's with them.Steve is shot in school ,beaten by a terrorist,survives in the wild and is ok but Jared is still recovering.?Get real.

Great story, I’ve made a playlist of the songs so far and it’s a great listen!

I find it funny some comments so far are about the lack of sex, and this being over the top. Having read my share of stories on the website, i actually find this one refreshing.

As if all the stories about 8-9 inches cock guys surrounded by exclusively awesome looking girls ready to sell their kidneys to have sex with them, share them, including family members, were not over the top. This is a fun story.

It is flawed, dont get me wrong. The dialogues are sometimes a pain, and repetitive ( the love declarations and sisters love explanations every other page).

The constant reminder, even supported by plot elements, that they would't have sex to protect their honor and respect the parents wishes is annoying, we get it, this family believe sex is not to be treated lightly, its for mature adults blahblah. Its ok, its different, we get it (at least the ones still on board).

It is still entertaining, and I am quite happy to have found this story.

I continue to love this story. Truly Outstanding!! Thank you!

Absolutely nuts but I love it.

Great stuff, like a Boys Own adventure

5/5