All Comments on 'Lady in Red Ch. 24'

Really loved your story and hope to see more of it soon!

HDK, you one fine imagination and I for one am having a ball going for this ride. Just excellent.

Bill Hardy can eat a bag of dicks!

Their reaction times continue to leave them out in front in battles of words or physical fights. This is a very nice fantasy but I am suspicious that in the real world that the Bill Hardys always win!

there are still good people in this country.

I just love this story, just don't ever think about not finishing this story. Too many times a author will have a good story going and then just up's and leaves everyone hanging and doesn't finish it.

why does she always get the last word

I enjoyed reading this story. Well defined characters. The delious blend of the infinite possibilities of youth and their strengths and vulnerabilities. This story has the potential of developing into a long story. Multiple storylines, including university stories, military stories doctors without borders, political career,or musical career. Looking forward to the rest of the story.

Enjoyed this chapter! Keep up the good work.

Such a great story!

And haven't missed anything of significance. Congratulations! You've written the first story I'm aware of that, not only does not have to be read to be enjoyed, but gets better the less you read it! Phenomenal.

This is one of the best stories I've read on Literotica.

Very well put together.

BTW - that ANON that's so negative - are you trying for the position of that asshole reporter in the story?

AnotherOldMarineVet

Lots of fun. My only question is when does Steve get to open up a big can of Whoop Ass on Bill Hardy?

High School Prom

and disaster relief benefit

shouldn't the money raised, including the check from CDC go to

Becton, Georgia? Not the hospital fund?

Charlie and the band fly to Breton,but how did their equipment get there,it couldn't be flown.Also why do we never meet any members of Charlie's band?.

Anonymous needs to take a hike.this story series is just unbelievable.

...more of the same...

enough, already!

To anonymous ( both of you) after so many chapters and a clear warning from the author just quit reading.

To the author, modern guns don’t smoke. Mrs Walker wouldn’t have had to wait for the smoke to clear. Either avoid technical details, or look them up.

Nice and sweet again.

I don’t think “letting the smoke clear” was meant literally. After all of the action, things had it settle down first before the next action.

Time to even out Mr Hardy

5/5