All Comments on 'Lady in Red Ch. 25'

by Harddaysknight

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AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Ah! the plot thickens!

Love it. Nicely done, nothing like a 16 year old to get things just a little out of kilter. The part with Kate is sooooo true to life.

BigJohn601BigJohn601over 10 years ago
I look forward to every chapter and I hope that it will keep going....

Because I really, really like it. It has something for everyone. I don't comment after every chapter because I would just run out of words of praise. Keep em comin ....PLEASE.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
on this site your stories keep me looking

loving wives gone to crap,your stories only thing going.keep writing great stories.

bruce22bruce22over 10 years ago
HDK we miss you and your sense of humour

over in LW!

Kate has certainly stopped looking like a mature young lady. First the esteem issues with Steve saving her from herself. Now she if playing the role of headstrong little girl. Sorry but I am not sure that I like her anymore!

teedeedubteedeedubover 10 years ago
Great

as usual. Had to wait too long! Keep 'em coming...... and thanks.....

dairetodairetoover 10 years ago
Poor Steve

Well i think Kate will be rather upset with herself

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
crappy dialogue

no one talks like that. really.

world record for cheesiness.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago

@ anonymous. Nope! The world record for cheesiness would go to moogplayer :D

Cre8ivecatCre8ivecatover 6 years ago
...still enjoying the ride!

An earlier post, this year for New Year's one of the nice things I did for myself was to reread the series. I'm still very much enjoying the ride, and I'm starting to think I might want a Steve action figure

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago

I've to hand it to you! In most of your works women, irrespective of their age, acts like spoiled pre teen divas! Is that intentional?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
Why

Why do we never hear anything about the members of Charlie's band?.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
More

More repetitive crap.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago

My third time reading this story it's great, if someone doesn't like it don't keep reading it.

Have you thought of giving it to a script writer? It would be at least as good as the Tom Clancy stories that are now films.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Finally a little conflict. I'm not saying I like conflict, but its perfectly natural amongst people and teens in particular.

Ravey19Ravey19about 2 years ago

Oh Kate! What's going to come of this? First family conflict.

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