All Comments on 'Lady in Red Pt. 02 Ch. 17'

loving this story!

thanks

AR

Thank you for another great chapter to add to this terrific story.

for this wonderfull story .

This is a great story I hope u keep them coming.

I love the cliffhangers in this story! A really fun read. Love to read more.

This chapter shows HDK is back on top. I had been disappointed with Ch. 16 and was eagerly awaiting Ch. 17. This chapter is back to the form that makes this series so great. What a cliff hanger!

Top of your form...extremely entertaining...and of course another cliffhanger...everything I have come to expect!!! Thanks!!!

Sorry cliffhanger

It should not be possible to maintain this high level of quality throughout this story, yet you continue to do so. I had wondered whether you abandoned the story after checking each day for the last month and coming up frustrated. This chapter was well worth the wait.

Thanks for another excellent effort.

Don't make us wait a month I just can't bear it lol great work

Just one of the best...of many exciting chapters!

OldMarineVet

Dang, you know how to make that cliff erode. Excellent and great fun. Can't wait for the next installment.

Thanks

once again you have written another great chapter, I love how you handled the politicians and the maturity that Gwen is showing. Your characters keep evolving which is refreshing. Yes there are a few typos that are not even worth mentioning. I do appreciate your cliff hangers I can't wait to read what Steve does to the idiot that has attacked Gwen.or has Gwen learned a few things and handles the man herself.

keep them coming (the chapters I mean).

Continuation of a fine story!

Love your work!

C

Another great chapter by a great author!

I hope they release MORE facts on the corrupt pols & more resign & or go to jail.

LIR needs to sign Jodi the French sax player & put her in the band.

Steph NEEDS a boyfriend.....a SEAL friend of Steve's?

WHEN does the "HAMMER" drop on Bill Hardy?

It's PAST TIME......

More Chip & Kate would be good too.

WRITE FASTER PLEASE

You magnificent, glorious asshole of a writer!!! Stop with the fucking cliffhanger endings. I'm terrified someone will run over you with a car and I'll be left hanging forever! Shit, that and I don't want to wait a couple of months to read the next chapter now dagnabit!

Great story, but I somehow doubt that you can wear hidden weapons around the Russian president...

I'm starting to hate the person who invented cliff hangers!! But I love the story. I was very happy to see a new episode. Thank you, Mike

hey HDK, AR Here? loyal fan :) i lost my book marks to the other site u post on. can you tell us where else to find you.

thx!

AR

I appreciated the drama of the hearing but was expecting a bit more retribution. I too am curious about why Bill Hardy is still lurking on the periphery.

Starting off the concert with Joan Jett’s “Bad Reputation “ would have been a master stroke.

MInor point, Steve wouldn’t have been allowed on stage in uniform at a concert even if he changed before singing. He perhaps would not have been allowed in uniform even at the hearing. I believe it’s the Hatch act that is the problem. A minor point it’s just a story.

Great story, but musicians can’t cover other people’s published work without royalties or an arrangement.