All Comments on 'Lady Madonna'

Smart move on hubbys part. Help the cheating slut control her lover and get yourself free.

You had a ton of stories in the Lady in red series but you need at least one more in Lady Madonna. Otherwise a clever story but the slut wife didn't seem upset. You'd thinkk she'd be a little more upset ater so many years of marriage.

Great just, but its mussing a complete ending.

I wish I had caught my ex sooner . The dumb cow was pregnant about 2 months after our divorce . I knew I wasn't the father and i knew who the father was . My ex never erased her text messages . But lucky for Me i saw what was going on . I wasted 4 years with her and she left me for a guy with no job . I did get the last laugh when I asked for DNA on her baby . It helped that I had pictures of them together .

The sex talk is pretty bad, but overall it’s hilarious!

You really should work on your copulating dialog. Seriously - who talks like that?

Ok story to start, but where's the ending?

There should have been an aftermath part that describes if she really did get Dean and also something about Kev getting his own fam.

Hilarious, but the ending was lukewarm. 1 extra star for the typographically correct quotation marks tho!

The cuck piss drinkers finds their skank wives cheating and run away to get drunk!! TOO FUCKED TO EVEN RECORD THEM

CUCKOLD WRITER

I loved it. Dean might have thought he was cuckolding Kevin, but instead he was digging a deeper hole for himself. Rita isn't too smart to be having an affair with her boss, especially when trying to get pregnant by her husband. Add in that he's out of town, and that she basically got caught doing it in her bed. I was surprised to read that Kevin didn't record them with his cell phone, like most people do. But, he went old school and used a tape recorder to record their sounds and admissions.

I gave it 5 stars, as it was a well told funny story.Thanks HDK for writing this one so long ago, and sharing it with us.

I don't think the mc was a wimp at all I would think it would be a lot of fun to fuck with that whore like he did!

Can anyone imagine what society would really be like if all men were the wimpy weak men that inhabit this writers world. As cuckolding rises, I guess we will all find out someday.

Wonder how he managed to be on a nation wide merry~go~round for so long?

Im glad he improved over time, for the most part. This however is easily one of his weakest, how anyone thinks otherwise is beyond me.

He does write some great ones, he writes some stinkers and this most definitely is a stinker.

Now we know why she allowed Dean to abuse her with crappy talk and actions. He's her boss. Wish there was an ending to this tale. Otherwise great as well as funny. LP

great twist hilarious revenge plan very nice

lots of room for more story line too

Okay, let me help you anonymouses without imagination. Rita is preggars with Dean’s child. Dean is her boss and he is married with three kids. Our MC tells Rita he will help her go after Dean to support their kid if she signs the divorce papers; if not, he will destroy here. He has recordings and dna to back him up, the dumb shit has nothing, so she signs and they go after Dean.

Now, do you think Dean gets a divorce and Marries Rita? His wife finds out and takes him to the cleaners? He has to pay child support and keep Rita happy too?

That’s the cool part about fantasy - you can end it the way you want. This ain’t a biography.

Cuck took ages to confront the slut wife....unfinished end by a pathetic writer

Ok story, great concept, but it would be better if we find out about the payback on Dean, etc.

nice truncated but nice...

Kinda neat story—at least good enough for a second read.

Sill 5 stars!

Bill S.

You are so right mordbrand. I reckon anonymous must be synonymous with MORON!

This would be a great story if there was an ending

Time to be annoyed again. The story us unfinished.

It annoys me terribly when people bitch about the story not being finished just because it doesn't spell out every event for the next few years. Use your imagination! Where else could the story go? Obviously, the cheating wife will go after her lover for support, he may or may not lose his own marriage, but no matter what they are both fucked.

"So Mowgli went away and hunted with the four cubs in the jungle from that day on. But he was not always alone, because, years afterward, he became a man and married.

But that is a story for grown-ups."

Do you really need everything spelled out for you from birth to death?

Do people really speak that way when they're screwing?

most of your stories, to me at least, seem to end 3/4 of the way through.

Sperm guy, this is what I found after doing my research. "Sperm production in the testes takes place in coiled structures called seminiferous tubules. Along the top of each testicle is the epididymis. This is a cordlike structure where the sperm mature and are stored. The release process starts when the penis fills with blood and becomes erect."

like most authors on this site, this one believes that sperm is stored in the testicles.

NOT SO! your balls are just a way point on a complex route. look it up!

Deserves a more detailed ending.

A lot of fun leading the bitch on when she thought hubby was so gullible. Good story

This story could have been so much more spectacular

Why do people want to read the same story over and over again? Who cares what happened to Dean. It's clear she did a number on him one way or another. If I read it right, the husband made one mistake by telling her he was going to Phoenix. If she got out of the blizzard, she could have caught up with him. Still, I loved the way he kept her guessing for weeks and weeks. Oh, and what does she see in Dean? He abuses her, calls her names, disgraces her,... He's nothing to brag about. Great fun!

good story, but ending was unfinished. What happened to Dean? Need to know the final payback.

Good one, with a get the hell out at the end.

This was a good story

Better!!! BTB finally!!!

I've read this story over a dozen times and I still laugh my ass off. My favorite part is when she finally realize to go to his job🤣🤣🤣.. she was so stupid. She deserved what she got. Plus more. I would love a part 2. I'd like to see how dean will handle his demon spawn.

IT WAS A GOOD STORY RIGHT UP TO WHEN RITA CONFRONTS HIM AT WORK. NOT SO GOOD AND IT FELT RUSHED TO THE ENDING.

I know it’s only a story and it’s just for entertainment but I like my stories to be believable even if only just a little Bit. ⭐️⭐️⭐️

Good story but needed to be finished felt left wanting

Nitpic yes they would becouze i would i couldnt relax while i have in my mind i needed to find that card so i would find the card first so i could finaly relax

Great story man.... but Iwould like more.

What happen after ?

5 Stars

Would have liked to know Deans reaction.Excuse for finding them out doesn't work,no one is going to look for some thing straight away when they have been away from home for a few days.

At least he got his revange, hope he impragnates Dean wife!!!!

That was one funny story, another HDK classic. It helps that I know who Wally Moon was. Family , since Brooklyn, are lifelong Dodger fans. Like the Immaculate Conception thing too.

It's funny. I like it. I think I'll make it a point to NEVER come home early. Oh wait, I'm retired. Never mind.

No right minded husband would have let their cheating continue if upon catching them in bed. Yes, give to anger, the result would be out weighted. Wife cheated, caught in the act. Man she is caught with is at work bruised, papers served for breaking up a marriage. His company may not like the news that followed, gets fired. If married, divorced. Cheated wife give birth to a bastard child. Husband has all.

I would have come down with the bat and kicked them both out of the house, naked.

Every once in a while, HDK swings and misses BIG TIME. This was that time.

Boring, no impact, unamusing, caricatures in the place of characters and, once again, no real ending.

Coulda, woulda, shoulda!

Zing, Zing, Zing a little Zong wit me! Well, I don't want to be by the Zuider Sea, but this felt like breath of fresh air on a rather tired subject. Five pointy things for the zinger!

Great story till the end. Their plan to screw Dean doesn't take care of the whore. Could have been really a blast! 3*s.

Great story. Can I have your extra Wally Moon card?

What about the Wally moon baseball card?

Just a story about deceivers.

5*

Wicked!

funny.

I would have said shit to her about going after Dean. Let her figure that out for herself, the digusting submissive slut.

Nice BTB BTW.

I wouldn't a dropped it until it was too slippery to hang onto....peace thru superior firepower....

I reckon what he should have done is get a stun gun! You know the one the Pigs use man!

He then sneaks in the room and fires the prongs from the stun gun connecting Deanos ballies! Hey Man makes one hell of an Orgasm seeing they are connected by His cock in her cunt! FORTH OF JULY FIREWORKS COME EARLY?

Thanks for sharing this Fantastic story with us!

Love you all! GREG.

OH 100 % OF READING ENJOYMENT BYE.

and go to prison for the rest of his life.

imaginative revenge mr anonymous.

Karma's a bitch sometimes!

Thanks for another good laugh!

Why in the world can't a you people come up with something that might actually make sense??? This story is for the birds....PATHETIC!!!

He's in his own house, watching his wife fucking her boss while Dean belittles and humiliates him, he's got a baseball bat in his hands and he just walks out???? REALLY!!! Just once, I'd like to see the guy completely lose his temper, come down from his hiding place with his bat and beat the fucker to death!

Didn't send the Wally Moon card.

I hate sounding like a broken record but...Another well deserved 5-Star story. Next!

Thankfully, no violence, but got her good, although three months with him gone is a stretch. And Dean, if the critic doesn't think that Dean now having to support the child, and keep it from his wife isn't punishment, then you're just stupid.

I would have used by phone to record her and Dean having sex, then gone down with "Duke" and bashed Dean's balls in!

He ended up getting rid of her, but he should have gotten his pound of flesh from ol' Dean too. Maybe wait until the kid is born and Dean has made a deal with his ex-wife then send the recordings to Deans wife as a cherry on top of the divorce sundae.

In the stories like this the revenge part is always too short.

Because of that i gave it a three. This wo.an was a moron.

Sic 'em, Kevin! Atta boy, have a blast while doing it! I enjoyed this story immensely. I've seen it listed several times, but until now never thought to read it. Perhaps the title threw me off. Cheers! Connoisseur29

I've read some stories that would make Q and James Bond proud. This story was brilliantly conceived in its simplicity.

'Nuff said!

Revenge stories are the best. But, seemingly, Rita is getting off too lightly.

...but I find it hard to believe she could be stupid enough to be fooled around for three months. She did not react as expected when her running around was put in the open. All in all a disappointing ending to a nicely written story. I missed severe consequences.

Thanks for sharing.

lover sharing your bed. TK U MLJ LV NV

i feel sorry for the kid can you imagine a mother like that.

anon 07/24 aka Missy Huggybear asks:

"...does anyone know of a man able to act/react...done something totally stupid in anger...."

When you get some experience at reading the commentaries you will come to the realization that a large percentage of them are being posted by prisoners from their cells and parolees from their half-way shelters.

All convicted for violence and sexual abuse of women and children. Their BTB fanaticism is to avoid accepting any responsibility for how they have screwed up their own lives.

anon 07/08 aka Master Bates asks:

"how many men are raising children that they are NOT the bio father???"

The correct answer ism how else can we reproduce all the annoyingmousies and spelunking BTB trolls that infest LW?

great story , very nice Light Hearted approach , remarkably well written.

found myself cheering for him & boooo ing for her very early on

question? does anyone know of a man able to act/react in such a calm & collected fashion in those circumstances ..

just curious, coz i know i would have been in pcs

or done something totaly stupid in anger .

anyhow , loved the story ,

lots of smiles throughout & only 1 pull on the heartstrings near the start.

might have been better placing it in humor & satire section.

xxxhugsxxx

children that they are NOT the bio father???

you had him hide out for three months, during which she never checked on him at work till it was too late.

What a fucking worthless cunt. She deserves her prick asshole married lovers child. Maybe they'll live happily ever after.

Nah

he is really helping himself and getting satisfaction, TK U MLJ LV NV

Well, no matter what she chooses, one part of the happy cheating couple will be fucked over ;) Even if the other one will escape his revenge, that's not a bad deal, right?

Good because the husband didn't take revenge, he took care of himself and let the cheaters screw themselves! Too bad he was almost 40 with no kids, but better that than raising a cheaters brats!

A fun read.

not a word wasted. Good plot handled well.

Enjoyed the unique plot of avoiding her for the duration. However, since you really let Dean off the hook, I cannot give it full marks. She should have gotten as little as possible from the divorce. Both she and Dean should have been fired from their company. Finally, Dean's wife should have taken him to the cleaners in a divorce, giving him limited access to his kids in the process.

He basically ingores and avoids her until the truth cannot be denied. The only problem that I saw with the story is: What if she went and had an abortion? The belly of evidence would then be gone.

gobbling a thick cock, cornholed by a fat one, betrayed!

Revenge is sweet. With any luck Rita will have triplets.

And have to raise them by herself.

HA HA HA HA HA

it bites the other direction, now its Dean & 4. TK U MLJ LV NV

Ignore the fucking cuckold's wimping.

Yr story is funny and very well written.

Carry on!

had his sense of humor "cucked" out of him, he fixates on his fav author Matt Moreau stories now, poor sod

Only issue here is that although he has manipulated her so far and we are left to imagine how she gets broken in the end (and there is little doubt she will get broken he has no reason to actually help her long term - he just wants her to sign and go away).

There is still a big hole in how it all worked - she is not so stupid she would not have walked in before or talked to his boss or something more proactive to catch up to him - I am always willing to suspend beliefs but this was a story about human adults and a conniving one as well - she could not be completely brain dead.

Still a fun and happily convoluted tale - thank you -