All Comments on 'Lady of the Stars Pt. 02'

by Sevilles_voice

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FrognutFrognutabout 8 years ago
Great Little Story

Love love your story but please keep it going.

Looking forward to the next part.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Really good

But I hope he trains her to be free

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
charming little story

short chapters, keep'em coming!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Loved it.

This is great, cute in places funny in others, I hope it continues.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Interesting

I like her, she is naive, but given her situation its to be expected. Can't wait for more.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Sad

I'm sad you didn't continue. It was really well written. I waited but it seems it's not gonna happen. Nice story tho. Good job. :)

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Please Continue!

Exactly that. This story was really well written and I instantly fell in love with the world you were creating. The first two came out so quickly that this pause has me very worried you don't intend to continue. Please do! I've been checking back here every couple days since you posted this chapter and I'll continue to do so, so keep going, it's great!

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Sad

Really good story falling ... incompleted :-(

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Please continue this. It's a wonderful story so far, with good characters and a good worldbuilding.

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