by KittyWithClaws
This almost brought tears to my eyes. It was very beautiful and well written!
If you do decide to continue the story, I hope that neither of them die!
Even if you don't continue the story, I hope you continue to write more!
Very well written and thought out, I liked that you have written from the girl's prospective too, I hope you continue with the story.
Good luck with your writings!
I am not one for Romance stories, but this one was well written and rich with details that brings the reader into the story. Very interesting and erotic.
You can’t not be finished with this one I am hooked on it , it needs to be done soon!!!