All Comments on 'Lamb and Wolf Ch. 02'

Such a great follow up from chapter 1. I am loving this story. Hmm, I feel rough patches are ahead with Josie being married and the new mystery girl moving across the street. I am looking forward to the next turn of events. There were a few grammatical error so you may want to have your stuff proofread, other than that, good job Manzi

This chapter did exactly what was lacking from Part 1 - their lovemaking was deeply and deliciously experienced by the reader. Thank you!

Please continue the story, I am addicted fully.