All Comments on 'Lana Goes Black'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
WHAT THE FUCKING HELL IS THIS SHIT?

You get off on reading and writing this dogshit? Well I hope you have got a wife who gets fuced every night and day by black cocks and I hope you are the proud father of a load of black kids. I also hope you your whore/slutbitch makes you eat all that cum out her nasty crusty cunt. Enjoy your cuckhood you sick fuck.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
A good job on writing,but the storyline is so used

There has been so many stories where the little white wife has been overwhelmed by a big black cock that it becomes an "also" story.One that is just like the rest of the interracial offerings. Not bad, just overused. To make this story more than just one of the other one's the author has to bring something new to the table in the way of something that is more erotic than the multitudes.Maybe the little white slut gets her pussy ripped up so bad that the only cock she can use if one that is grotesquely big. Maybe the black guys sell her white slut ass to a whorehouse, where she is fucked to death in a year. anything to make the story different. Thanks

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Ok ...so you wrote a story...oh goody goody

Now you read the comments and people are bashing you. Maybe just maybe readers are tired of the same old shit... Husband is a disgrace to the white race, the other man is black and Gods gift to women. The wife is a pure skank who se drippy itchy cunt makes her fuck all the time and chubby beer drinking hubby doesn't like it so he gets a black guy for his wife to fuck and she turns into nigger slut. Shit why don't you go and hang yourself...like with a rope//

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
*Yawn* OH, is the story over?

did I miss anything exciting..cuz you know, this crapper of a story put me to sleep!

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Writing is good

Couldn't you come with a plot that was a little different than the 100s of others here with this same plot.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Fuck You!

For wasting our time and yours, mentally ill people don't turn anyone on, and these two would need to be to want this. Did you jack off writing this cause your the only one who thinks its hot.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
rudeness

Man, people must have to be masochists to write a story for here. People don't have to be like we are, have the same turnons and turnoffs as us. If people are this prudish and uptight about a story on an erotic story site, you have to wonder how they are in real life. I apologize to the writer for the rudeness of some readers who confuse prejudices with constructive criticism.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
YES, YES

this is what white women were made for and white men want it to happen. all of you white men just confess to the fact that you really want to eat black cum from your wifes cunt also, i know i do.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Put

Your little pile of dog shit in gay or interracial, let it draw flys there.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Were there any rational adults or even adults in

this story?

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Ever wonder why black men go for white women?

Maybe because black women want to fuck higher in the food chain.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
For those who do not want to leave a comment

The standard rating scale has been discontinued, my guess is too many zeros. Like the IQ of the writers of all of these superblack stories.

FunseeeekrrFunseeeekrrover 14 years ago
Trying some big thick black

cock can be so LUSTY, but going out where you are no longer in control of the situation can make things very uncomfortable for sure. The hotel room was hot, but they should have known better to go to a party after fucking him the night before.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Exciting

It was sexy how this married couple has expanded their loving relationship with experimentation and have been caught up in the excitement.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
W.T.F?

Why would anyone want this to happen? Okay apart from Funseeker who is a black cumslut. But all you other freaks, who would or do sit there and watch a black man fuck your white wife? WHY? I can only guess it's some sort or mental breakdown. Of course what I would like to know is would the writer or the husband in the story go to his best friends and family and tell them that his wife is now a black cumslut/whore and that he sucks black cum out her nasty crusty drippy cunt. Somehow I don't think he would admit to such a thing. Or perhaps he would perhaps his mothers and sisters would like to get involved. There is one person on this site that insists his daughters, wife, mother and every female he knows is fucking blackmen and giving them lots of nigger babies. Perhpas this writer and this other person should get together and have a black cumslut/whores blackmans cuckold party. I am sure the nigggers would love that idea.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
More man and soon!

I reall enjoyed this and wish it could happen to me and my wife.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Nothing new but nice...

Like one person said, this is a fairly common story but I like it all the same.

As to "W.T.F? 11/22/09 by Anonymous" - you just showed yourself to be the racist that you are.

How many people would go to ANY family member and share their kinks? How many would tell about how they like BDSM, swinging, etc? My guess would be "Close to none!"

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
nice try

but just another woman=fuckmeat story. a bit dumb and to many cliches

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
stupid

and he should not be surprised with a definitive 'see you lana'. a lesson learned, probably not for him, bit at least they'll take care of her other need too and support her?

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Wow from wife to total whore in one night

but that's all it takes when you know you have totally degraded yourself with no possible way of redeeming yourself.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Alone

Well, I think he ends up going home alone and waits for the phone call that says she'll be home in a month, she thinks. She needs to get these new thrills out of her system and a new guy Daryl seems to be in love with her and wants to show her around for a few weeks before she leaves.

So, what did you think would happen...Epilogue???

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Nice!

Great work! Keep it up!

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Jerome, Really?

I am all for these types of stories, but Jerome for the name of the guy? Weak, might as well named him Luther, or Otis, or some other stereotypical name.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Don't Understand?

It amazes me how someone makes an effort to write an erotic story, no matter what the storyline...to please you and the rest of us dick pounding men that like to masturbate to hot stories? Early on in the story, you can see where story is headed..so why did you continue to read(probaby jacking furiously on your own cocks)fimishing the story wishing it was your wife....then later take the time to berate the author for being a ball less white cuck and his wife a skank whore? I find it ironic and hilarious that you sit and read and jackoff to this author's efforts then once your nut is done..have nothing but scorn for his character or story? What is YOUR PROBLEM? If he'd picked you to be central character and stud in story..you'd think she's a queen and he's a cool hubbie!Admit you're either a racist

or so pathetic that all you have sexually is pounding your own weinie reading porn story's then berating them!Is all the self loathing really directed at your self? If you don't care for this type story...DON'T FUCKING READ IT(and masturbate)?

CafeExtremeCafeExtremeover 14 years ago
Good story

This is a good story. For those that don't like the storyline, dont read it.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Slut

It took him how many years to find out she could cheat. She told him in such a way that she could keep him and have her cake and eat it too. Imagine how secretly excited she was in San Francisco when idiot came up with his idea of interracial sex...boy, did she marry the right idiot.

It amazes me, most married people are in deeply in love with eachother, monogamous and any form of extramarital sex or betrayal is devastating and final.

Oh well, he always was a wimp - right. She wishes they could have been doing this years ago.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Yeah,but that is what sickos nigger tow animals want.

Any way they can humiliate their white Masters they do, anonymously and with great gusto. "1" !

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
u dip shit pervert

wipe ur ass with ur crap tales then eat them. quit stuffingbthe ballot box eith ur own votes

1 star.

OOAAOOAAover 7 years ago
Very good story!!!

Congrats!

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Lana?

I´ve been reading your stories since earlier today. Well they seem to just run into each other with the same story line. So far you seem to be the only one with the smallest cock wherever yaĺl are at. And there seems to be at least one ten inch black cock in all your stories. Also seems Lana is going to fuck whether you´re there or not And she never says no to cock. Don´t matter who it is. So it´s all the same except for changing or adding names all of your stories are the same theme.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Jerome

His name was Jerome! It's a wonder that his friend wasn't called Jamal.

timrivtimrivover 5 years ago
Chapter 2

To bad there was never a chapter 2.

Something like:

Lana stays, Mike goes back to the hotel.

Lana returns 3 days later.

Mike and Lana return home,

Lana is pregnant with twins.

Mike and Lana part.

Lana has the babies.

DNA. shows each one has a different father.

Lana can’t forget Jerome and Lionel big cocks so goes back to SF.

Becomes a fuck toy for the boys.

Five years later Mike and his second wife and their two kids are in SF on holiday.

Mike Meets Lana, who is pregnant with her fifth black baby.

They talk and she looks much older and tired.

She tells them she still loves him and how sorry she is about what happened.

He looks at her, both have tears in their eyes, he says, “I’m sorry i don’t know you.” And walks away.

His wife asks him who was the woman.

He says, “no one I know thought she knew me”

They walk over to their kids and all walk away as Lana breaks down crying.

26thNC26thNCalmost 5 years ago
Damn

I like timriv's ending for this story much better than when's beginning.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
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IFAFILHGIFAFILHGalmost 4 years ago
STUPID SLUT WHORE

Everything was fine till she took off upstairs without hubby.. never even considerate enough to look for him..to tell him.. or go get him... this super bitch slut whore can't be trusted... she just proved it....hubby better put a stop to this real soon unless he thinks divorce court is fun...

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Even Covid 19 is better than this pathetic story

Just another stupid and sick cuck and slut story. Ridiculous. The cucks are so pathetic it just seems there is no end to their perversion.

Meenacarlous28Meenacarlous28over 3 years ago
Cuck to a black bull

Just loved it. The black boss of my hubby after having seen me at the company staff party invited us to his farm for the weekend. He got my hubby really drunk and then took me in front of him. My hubby is only just over four inches when hard and Simon was over seven inches!!! From that day when he used all my holes my hubby can't satisfy me. Now every weekend my hubby takes me to Simon at his place .

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

wrong category. Should be interracial

iammweaseliammweaselover 1 year ago

Lana goes black

Hubby/writer goes gay

And the dude pretending to be Meena is just the one you need to hook up with and you'll both be happy.

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