Landlord Loves My Fiancée Pt. 02

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The landlord tries to get a nice look at my fiancée.
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Part 2 of the 5 part series

Updated 06/07/2023
Created 09/10/2015
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By the time dinner time had rolled around, I was a nervous wreck. I was sweating all over. The thought of Alfie leering at my love was too much for me to handle. I kept thinking back to his hand patting her bottom through her leggings. How it had made me feel.

I was so ashamed. I couldn't get the image out of my head.

Somehow I pulled myself out of that mental loop as Melissa walked into the room. She was in a thin denim dress that looked almost like a robe because she had a fabric belt that was holding the piece together. The dress was shorter than I would have liked. If it ended an inch or two higher, it would look like a glorified shirt. Melissa's thick brown thighs were on full display. And my eyes went straight for them. They continued to trail down to her boots.

For a second I forgot about everything and just considered how lucky of a man I was.

She checked her watch.

"Come on, we should get going. Alfie is waiting!"

My throat got dry again. This was a terrible idea. What was I doing? Why was I letting this older man leer at my wife?

Before I could say anything, Melissa was heading to the door. I was behind her.

Thoughts were not going through my mind. I could hear my own breath. It felt like an eternity before we got to the door.

Alfie opened it instantly. He beamed.

"Hello, my dear!" he said and gave Melissa a hug in front of me.

She hugged him back. Stepping back, she handed over a bottle of wine.

"You shouldn't have," he said, smiling. He seemed genuine and nice.

"It's the least we can do!" Melissa replied back. "Should I take off my shoes or-"

"Oh no no, head right on in," Alfie responded. Melissa walked into the house. It was my turn to greet Alfie. I looked up and shook his hand. He shook mine back, acting as if nothing was going on.

I started to walk in but then Alfie grabbed my shoulder. He leaned over to my ear.

"Now those are some fuck me boots if I've ever seen them."

All the air left my lungs. I felt like I couldn't breathe.

Alfie laughed to himself and walked ahead of me. After a few seconds, I gathered my strength and walked into the living room. Melissa was looking at some paintings. Alfie was asking her about art. He told her to sit as she grabbed the bottle of wine to open. It was all so normal and yet so terrible.

After popping the bottle open, Alfie asked me if I wanted some. I said no. He poured a glass and walked over to Melissa, handing it to her as she was sat on the sofa. She smiled and took it. He lingered. Walking back to the kitchen, he winked at me.

Curious, I walked over to Melissa. Standing from Alfie's previous spot, I realized he could see down my wife's top at a decent percentage of her bra and chest. Her brown cups hugged by her lilac bra.

I collapsed onto the arm chair, not able to hold myself up. Alfie came over and sat next to me. Melissa sipped her wine and asked more about the items around Alfie's house. He pointed to the coffee table book and said it was one of her favorites.

Melissa leaned forward to check it out. And because of the way her dress was designed, the parting of the dress fell into her lap and her panties came into full view as she opened the large book.

"Oooh that's it," I heard Alfie mutter under his breath.

It was as if Melissa had lifted her dress for Alfie to see her tiny delicate panties. Having to spread her legs to lean forward, he was getting a clear view.

"Actually that's a uh... the painting over there is better!" I managed to squeak trying to get Melissa to move. Melissa turned to her side. I could feel Alfie's stare at the back of my head.

But instead of sitting and staring, Alfie got up and grabbed the painting from the wall and walked over, holding it in front of Melissa.

"That's lovely!" Melissa exclaimed.

"Truly is," Alfie responded, blatantly looking down Melissa's top.

"You know what, I just realized, I'm not feeling well," I stammered as I bolted up and grabbed Melissa's hand. "Thank you so much Alfie but we must get going."

He smiled back. "I understand."

Melissa looked confused as I lead her outside. Alfie followed but stopped at his doorway.

"Rest up," he said, "who knows what will happen tomorrow."

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Back in our apartment, Melissa asked what's wrong. I had no answer for her. This was all too much for me. I had no idea where this was going. She shrugged it off and got into sleeping clothes.

Together, we got in bed. Laying there, she kissed me and said that everything was going to be alright. Finally, I conceded that she was right.

"Hmmm," she said as I was dozing off, "I wonder what I'm going to do tomorrow. I could either do laundry or go for a swim. Oh well, that's for tomorrow."

And with that we fell asleep.

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AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

Five stars (4.75 = 95%, ☆☆☆☆☆)!

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Melissa is a keeper. Full stop. End of story.

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

Five stars (4.75 = 95%, ☆☆☆☆☆)!

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

Excerpt from the story.

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... He pointed to the coffee table book and said it was one of her favorites.

Melissa leaned forward to check it out. And because of the way her dress was designed, the parting of the dress fell into her lap and her panties came into full view as she opened the large book.

"Oooh that's it," I heard Alfie mutter under his breath.

It was as if Melissa had lifted her dress for Alfie to see her tiny delicate panties. Having to spread her legs to lean forward, he was getting a clear view.

End quote.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

"He pointed to the coffee table book and said it was one of her favorites." Having just met her, how would he know what one of her favorite books was? Very erotic build-up. I'm quickly moving on to chapter three. Thanks.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

You are off to a great story here. Please keep it going.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Love it, gave you a 5 [☆☆☆☆☆ (4.9/5=98%)]! Very very erotic. Totally realistic.

Mark is confused 😕. He is losing his self-esteem & confidence in self. Alfie is playing mind games; we see that Mark is not up to the task.

Philosophically speaking, Mark's subconscious mind has managed to decode the writing on the wall, which reads as follows:

"Alfie's gonna fuck Melissa, and there's nothing Mark can do about that."

My friendly advice to Mark: MELISSA is a KEEPER!

To bad_friend69:

The story is multi-layered. You did not go for cheap shots. You defined the characters very very well. Your writing is concise, that's how you managed to say quite a lot on less than one page.

👍 👍!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
The story was musterfully divided into chapters. So far both Ch. 1 & 2 are very erotic. I like the author's writing style very much

The narrator & his girlfriend remind me of my 2nd wife & me. Before we moved to Canada, we worked on cruise ships. We often had opposite shifts... She was very, very sexy... After a while she stopped pretending she was faithful. The whole crew knew she was a serial cheater...

She & i are no longer together. I still can not hate her. While we were together i wanted to leave her on several occasions. Each time she persuaded me not to leave her. By then she knew only too well i was getting a kick out of her fooling around... I cannot describe how much i wanted her although I knew i was sharing her with other men...

Life can be strange. When you R different then most people, they find you strange.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
I LOVE ONE-PAGE STORIES. THIS ONE IS EROTIC, EROTIC TENSION IS IN THE AIR. I GAVE IT 5*s

The inner world of Melissa's fiancé is done very well.

He is young and still insecure whereas Melissa is confident & aware of the effect she has on men.

The landlord has no scruples &, given a chance, will go in for the kill.

At any given moment Melissa will needs 2 men in her life: one full time and one part-time/casual.

The set up is perfect for further developments, but this chapter is erotic in its own right.

I will now read Ch 3 (alredy posted).

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
MODERATOR, WHY DID I HAVE TO GOOGLE THE NAME OF THIS STORY to find it today?

When i look at the New Erotic Stories this am it is not in the list . I knew it had been posted because i started reading it yesterday.

Also, what happend to the latest installmejt of "Tht IT Guy". Yesterday i saw it had been posted and planned to read it this a.m. This a.m. it is not to be found. WTF is going on. It appewrs to me Literotica has lost some stories which had been posted on the same date as this on. Another was something about the "Succubus"?

BTW 5 stars for this story.

jane39stevensjane39stevensover 8 years ago
More needed

Really looking forward to the rest, hope it comes along soon

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