by bad_friend69
Go for the kill Alfie!
Show the little wimp how a real man pleases a young woman!
Little sluts like Melissa can tell when a man is truly hung. !'m dyng to learn what Alfie is packing!
Oh my god! It was fucking hot! I was fingering myself while reading this. I would like to tease someone the same way!
I can't wait for the next chapter. I hope Alfie is hung like a horse and makes her become his!!!
....mmm... Wonder what state Melissa will be in when old Alfie has finished with her? Will she cling to Him like he's the dearest thing ever? How much will she miss his wonderful cock when it finally leaves her?
Will she be hooked? You bet!
And the story title? Very promising!
..but please don't make it too easy for Alfie...the usual "now she is willing and can't wait to do it with him" would spoil the story No, let her feel remorse, let her try to move away from Alfie.have some surprises ...of course, in the end to no avail...
Thanks for writing these very erotic stories. Loved them. Please keep up the good work.
Don't post rest of story it's getting worse
Great job, very hot. Please post the next part.Thank you !
I was blown away by your measured pace and tension. Then... she suddenly jumped the guy and then fucking was described. I'd love to see the same kind of attention in the build up applied to taking the clothes off...
Great story, just so much opportunity lost right at the end
I really love the part where it just ends and there's no real ending. I totally hope you don't write the other chapter soon at all. (Sarcasm)
Oh god please write part 5. You cant leave us hanging like this. This is too cruel. Cant wait for alfie to pound her with his big ugly fat cock
So yeah like are you a sadomasochist or something? Just leave everyone hanging.
Melissa has a strong hot-wife side which she is not aware of as yet.
Thanks to her landlord Alfie & the total stranger from Ch. 4, she inadvertently (practically subconsciously) takes the road of self-discovery. Of course her husband has a very prominent voyeur/cuckold side about which he is in denial although he feels it.
Hope that there will be a part 5, story is great and looking forward to more!!!!
An author with a decent story line just disappears and leaves it hanging?
The fiancée will be a hot wife. Her future husband has already discovered his voyeur/cuck-wannabe side. The two of them have let the landlord into their marriage. I expect that they will outgrow him in due course & will move on.
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I have read all the comments. My favorite one is anon 06/14/16 [☆☆☆☆☆ (5)
Melissa has a strong hot-wife side which she is not aware of as yet...]
Super hot how her husband can’t stop the other men from touching her and she gets excited by how they seems to own her. They can sense she doesn’t have the willpower to resist and they can do whatever they want to her as her husband watches. She likes men who want to fuck her and don’t care about her husband, the stronger men can just take what they want, taunting her husbands as she cums from them fucking her when they want.
LANDLORD LOVES MY FIANCÉE PT. 04 is an excellent wife sex story.
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Anonymous over 7 years ago
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Melissa has a strong hot-wife side which she is not aware of as yet.
Thanks to her landlord Alfie & the total stranger from Ch. 4, she inadvertently (practically subconsciously) takes the road of self-discovery. Of course her husband has a very prominent voyeur/cuckold side about which he is in denial although he feels it...
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After a few minutes, the Uber driver reminded him to put on his seat belt.
He laughed to himself and apologized. He looked around for the place to plug it in. Melissa was sitting on it. He knew this. At least I'm pretty sure he knew this. But he took this opportunity to run his hand from Melissa's knee to the bottom of her white dress, along her soft leg, looking for the buckle. My face turned red. Melissa was too drunk to notice the violation...
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