All Comments on 'Lap Dance'

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bornagainbornagainover 16 years ago
Great story and well written

That was some story all husbands should read that and know that any wife would love that and try to do that in a strip club and carry her off on your shoulders after that.lol

gatorhermitgatorhermitover 16 years ago
Funny and erotic - well done

Great fantasy. No need for tittie bars with ladies like this one around!

peggytwittypeggytwittyover 16 years ago
Very well done fantasy with humor

Very well done story and wish my girl would follow suit.<P>Thank you for the entertainment.<P>PT

OVERLANDOVERLANDover 16 years ago
What the......

fuckin' hell is a t-back? Why write a story that most people can't understand.

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Good and Funny

I liked it and I'm supposed to be a troll. Forget the goofy Limey's comments.

Alvaron53Alvaron53over 16 years ago
Enjoyable stroke story

Thank you.

sherlock40sherlock40over 16 years ago
Excellent Story

I always enjoy a true loving wife story instead of the tripe that is normally served here. A very erotic story. Thank you. For those that crave betrayal and non-eroticism, look elsewhere.

Nightowl22Nightowl22over 16 years ago
Really liked this.

Very playful, very sexy and all very kosher!! Very enjoyable read!!

KOLKOREKOLKOREover 16 years ago
That is one lucky guy!

This should go to the "How to" section as a mandatory reading to all married couples! Please write more REAL loving wives stories.

BazzzBazzzover 16 years ago
Good story

Nice story. You kept up a sort of suspense through the whole thing. More atune to the Romance section though

ExoManiExoManiover 16 years ago
Great Story

This is a great story. It's hot and well written. I also noticed that you wrote this hot story without ever actually describing what the characters look like. Well done!

auhunter04auhunter04over 7 years ago

that could save a lot of marriages

was in a stripper bar. Guy sitting next to me said I have better at home. I asked what was he doing here? He said she can even dance better than them. What are you doing here. Leaving half his drink he headed for the door I yelled don't forget the flowers

PS am 67 and alone - been 20+ years since I was laid so I guess I have room to talk.

My blind dog don't like flowers

26thNC26thNCover 4 years ago
Good

Good story I wasn't expecting that. A husband and wife, together.

Bill669JBill669Jover 1 year ago

Really great story

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