All Comments on 'Lapdance'

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jimmyjoycejimmyjoycealmost 17 years ago
Sexy stripper!

I liked this Phaedra. It's certainly well-written, and I liked your description of the strip - I really saw it in my mind's eye. (There's that nice moment when the skirt falls to the floor as she wiggles her bum, for example. And the things she does with her breasts when she's leaning towards him, hands on his thighs ... Very stripper-ish.) Oh, and did I mention that it's sexy? No? Well, it is. If I'd been Robert, watching, I'd have some stickiness on my fingers afterwards as well.

kinglearkinglearover 15 years ago
Yummy

A very hot story. Thank you for putting out the effort. I have to think that since you knew Robert was on the way over, the chance of him catching you was fairly strong. Perhaps you wanted it to occur? Maybe a sequel to this story and explore the risk/exhibitionist aspect?

Dialog would REALLY put me there, also.

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