All Comments on 'Larceny of the Succubus'

Ok... This story left me with a hell of a lot of questions. Maybe there should be a part 2 to clarify the meaning of the whole thing.

Interesting. I like it. Technically, it was well written. Everything is good except for the ending which really doesn't make any kind of sense.

The story was well written and blended horror and eroticism well. The ending seems to have confused people, seeming to lack clarity. But the clues are there. The title, the tags and the hints given throughout the story.

Lizette is a trickster and by the end it's pretty clear she was lying about regaining her humanity. Just when the protagonist thought he was the one in control the succubus sinks her fangs into him. The story tag "conversion" leads me to believe he too was turned into a demon, bound to the succubus.

Not a terrible fate with all things considered..