by deathlynx
This was sweet and romantically done. I am enjoying the different tales of Laresa and love your input in this chain. Thanks for writing in it. Beautifully written description of a woman's first with a man she obviously cares very much for. ~ Red
After reading several of the Chapters all I can say is this is one 'busy' Genie. I love the way this Author switches locales and brings in different characters to liven up an already exciting story. The best part - there's more.
to the chain! Who hasn't wished for someone to whisper advice in their ear on occasion to keep them from screwing up? Great development on Laresa's powers and personality too.
Looking forward to the next chapter... Seven ~_^
I very much like the smallness of this story.
Not to say I didn't enjoy the other stories in this chain but I much appreciated that there was very little magic in this one. Just a woman getting a little help to get an everyday wish.
Well done.
Could say plenty more but won't. Sometimes less said is best. :)
this tale had all the charm and gooy mushy stuff of a disney film, but with really hot sex to spice it up!
I truly enjoyed this sweet story of a first time with a true love. The genie as a coach is a very nice touch. And the glimpse of the genie as a person is a wonderful addition.
Thanks.
Black Tulip
deathlynx:
You have done nothing to lessen the joy I feel as I read each chapter. The tale just gets better and better. Thank You. Ronnie W.