All Comments on 'Laresa's World Ch. 06: Christine'

by deathlynx

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RedHairedandFriendlyRedHairedandFriendlyover 17 years ago
Loving this chain. . .

This was sweet and romantically done. I am enjoying the different tales of Laresa and love your input in this chain. Thanks for writing in it. Beautifully written description of a woman's first with a man she obviously cares very much for. ~ Red

duddle146duddle146over 17 years ago
Marvelous Genie!

After reading several of the Chapters all I can say is this is one 'busy' Genie. I love the way this Author switches locales and brings in different characters to liven up an already exciting story. The best part - there's more.

DarkniciadDarkniciadover 17 years ago
Wonderful addition

to the chain! Who hasn't wished for someone to whisper advice in their ear on occasion to keep them from screwing up? Great development on Laresa's powers and personality too.

Looking forward to the next chapter... Seven ~_^

rgraham666rgraham666over 17 years ago
Nice

I very much like the smallness of this story.

Not to say I didn't enjoy the other stories in this chain but I much appreciated that there was very little magic in this one. Just a woman getting a little help to get an everyday wish.

Well done.

LadyCibelleLadyCibelleover 17 years ago
I liked it. :)

Could say plenty more but won't. Sometimes less said is best. :)

TserancTserancover 17 years ago
cute, charming, and hot

this tale had all the charm and gooy mushy stuff of a disney film, but with really hot sex to spice it up!

Black TulipBlack Tulipover 17 years ago
Sigh

I truly enjoyed this sweet story of a first time with a true love. The genie as a coach is a very nice touch. And the glimpse of the genie as a person is a wonderful addition.

Thanks.

Black Tulip

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Truly a series one cannot leave alone

deathlynx:

You have done nothing to lessen the joy I feel as I read each chapter. The tale just gets better and better. Thank You. Ronnie W.

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