All Comments on 'Laresa's World Ch. 08: Dolph'

is a cruel Mistress. Laresa got her way and her revenge very nicely. Good job.

Laresa's world isn't always happy is it. ;) Great story and excellent detail and writing. Thanks for the wicked read. ~ Red

You've been mentioned in the New Story Review thread in the Author's Hangout!

Yup, it's truly a good one. It's good to see that Laresa doesn't HAVE to be a victim to her Masters' wishes; that there are ways she can change the outcome of situations to make it more equal.

I love what you did with this chapter.

Oh I do love it when such utter scumbags get their just deserts.

Nice one.

Yet another element of our dear Laresa that we knew was there - how could it not be after so many years of servitude to a multitude of Masters? It's great to see her deal with a cruel Master in the way he deserves! Wonderful read, and excellent addition to the chain.

deathlynx:

Don't mess with a genie and especially don't piss her off. Thank You. Ronnie W.

Its nice that you brought some reality to the story, and managed to give Laresa some brains as well as personality. Great job.

I love a bit of girl power and this is even better: genie power!

I really enjoyed this chapter and it gives new dimensions to work with in next chapters.

Thank you.

Black Tulip

revenge is a dish best served cold...or in Laresa's case...hot...very very hot. Loved it! Djinn with an attitude! I love it! ;-) <cackles>

That was a great read, even more deapth to Laressa, and the truely satisfying read of seeing a jack ass get rewarded Pissed off genie style! Like Karma on Crack!

I really love seeing assholes getting it (oopppsss). love this chapter