All Comments on 'Large and Lovely Lynda'

by NiceGuyInVa

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
Nice but to short

It is always a pleasure to see/read a story written about a BBW. However it just seemed a bit short. I would have enjoyed more character development and perhaps a longer love scene. I finished the piece feeling cheated a little.

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