Last Campout Ch. 01

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Son goes camping with his friends and mother one last time.
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Part 1 of the 2 part series

Updated 10/19/2022
Created 09/09/2011
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"Whoa you need to come over here and look at this." I overheard my friends voices from around the corner of my house, they whispered frantically.

That was the day I had been waiting over two months for, since May 14th to be exact. May 14th was my birthday. I had finally turned 18 and gone through the tribulations of family oriented celebration in my honour. My aunts and uncle had come to visit all of which got tipsy and excited while singing and gift-giving. It was a great day and at the end of it my mother asked me what I wanted from this first year of being an adult and after a moment of thought I told her I wanted one last camping trip with my friends in the summer before we headed out to University in September.

I still remember my mothers smile that day. She was a few drinks in and looked a little mischievous then told me. "Alright, but I'm driving."

So then, even though I was looking so forward to that trip, I couldn't help but feel a little peeved that I was doing almost all the packing.

I placed our cooler full of food in to the back of the van and grumbled to myself. "Those assholes better have discovered gold over there"

Around the side of the house was our yard. It was mostly overgrown due to the lack of attention. Well, I suppose one of my friends had to pee and instead of going in the house found it more convenient to go in the yard.

I walked around the corner to confront them, and possibly punch them, but was halted when I saw what they were doing. Sam, Phil, and Ian were standing with mouths agape outside the window to my mothers bedroom. They didn't even turn to look at me because they were too busy watching the silhouette of my mother in her bedroom.

Her closet was right beside the window, the drapes were closed but I suppose the light from her bathroom was on and painted her shadow on full display. The thing that kept my friends attention was that she was clearly not wearing a shirt or bra while she chose her outfits for the trip.

My mother was a shapely woman, for a 38 year old she was smoking' hot. Her breasts were D-cup and when she bent over they hung beautifully. The light was so perfect we could even just barely make out the shape of her nipple pointing straight down. The air conditioning must have felt nice on her bare pale skin. She then stood straight up again and looked down at her chest, she must have been feeling a bit self-conscious that day because she reached up, grabbed her breasts in her hands and seemed to weigh them.

Finally she ended the show by reaching over and putting a bra on. I found myself wondering what I had missed before going over there.

I looked at my friends and they then turned to me. It was an awkward silence for a moment when they realized I had been watching my mother with them and finally Phil broke the silence. "Dude.... Your mom is fucking hot.

I punched him in the chest hard enough to knock the wind out of him then told them to get in the van it was almost time to go.

Ian yelled "Shotgun!"

Ian raced to get in the front seat and I got in to the middle and sat in the chair behind the driver seat.

"Let's sit in the back." Phil said to Sam. "Mike will probably just punch us more for wanting to bone his mom."

I shot Phil a menacing look as he and Sam laughed while moving to the back seat.

We closed the van door and it started to get hot in there without the Air Conditioner on. It was 32C outside and we were all quickly getting uncomfortable.

We all looked over to the front of the house when we saw my mom step outside. She was wearing a white tank top and jean shorts. She turned around and placed her suitcase on the ground then fumbled with her keys to lock the door. I'm pretty sure I wasn't the only one looking at my moms tight ass in those jean shorts. In fact I was starting to feel like boning my mom too.

My mom turned around to face the van again and looked at us through her sunglasses. She often wore a baseball cap, today it was plain sky blue cap turned backwards. She told me it made her feel young. She walked over to the van, through her suitcase in the trunk, then came around to the drivers side and got in. The whole time all eyes were on her.

When she got in and closed the door she asked, "You boys all ready?"

My friends all responded with a "Yes Ms. Hewitt."

She then started the van, turned on the A/C and pulled away from the house. That was the beginning of the best vacation ever.

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
Where's the story?!?!?!

Nice intro but, don't waste a reader's time with just an intro and drag out a single story into a bunch of "chapters." One click = one story. Sequels are appropriate after you have developed characters readers like and want to read more about, you haven't done that!

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Spellcheck ?

The past tense of throw is threw not through which you use when you say "He threw a rock through a window" .Otherwise ?? you have my attention , but don't gamble on anyone putting up with another chapter without putting meat on the plate .

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
When you finish

9th grade english class come back and try to write this story again.

deeferdenisdeeferdenisover 12 years ago
come on...

@mrperv46.... dude... this story was not ready for publishing in the incest catagoree, maybe some voyerism section... but there has to be some kind of sexual activity. thats the whole point to this genre... ONE PAGE does not make a chapter. grammer isnt important as long as you have some incestuous activity... in this story there was no INCEST.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
They are driving a van

Yet Mom put her suitcase in the trunk?

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
FAIL

How about finishing the story before you submit it.

digdaddyrichdigdaddyrichover 12 years ago
This seems more like an introduction to the story

So far, not too much has happened, but some of the characters have been formed, and a partial theme has been set.

Perhaps the next chapter will be more productive in setting up what the story will be dealing with.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Oh God, not another one.

Too short. Please, rewrite

mrpervy46mrpervy46over 12 years ago
Not Bad

Don't take too many comments to heart, I do reserve the authors right to do the story as she/he sees fit and we as readers only have the right to say how we like to see in a story, we don't have the right to tell you how to tell it. I definitely don't agree with cowards not leaving a name, and I don't believe that public computer BS, because I've done it and still left my name. That said I know you will have you story planned and I look forward to reading it.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Short And Direct Is Not Bad

Characters are established. Son is an over achiever who continues wprling when others stop. Mom is a an enigma however the blank slate allows you to fill her out and draw readers further into her un-willing seduction.

Phil is a boaster, Sam is an unknown, and Ian appears to be a willing participant as the hovering voyeur with not a clue of how to initiate a seduction. Ian could be developed as an imature who read adult fiction and assumes his tongue in a woman will make them his anytime conquest forever.

No mention of a father. You could bring him as a character later. A one night visit following a sexual interlude, or never mention him at all beyond existing.

I prefer a woamn have a hair festuned pussy because I don't enjoy the bald virgin aspect of seasoned sex partner.

A woman wants/needs to be seduced and rarely, very very rarely, takes her own clothes off to induce a young male into sex. She doesn't need to and wants the mental cushion of telling herself later it was a seduction. Bring it along slowly and build to a mental picture. Stay clear of the idea she will pull a train until after she has a scene with just two guys first.

Pot works better than beer considering age of boys and mom.

Good luck and I'll check you out as this goes along.

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