All Comments on 'Last Day'

A delicious and delightful story. What a lucky boy! If only my experience in the bookshop had been thus:)

I encourage you to post more.

Hot as that story was the place should have burned to the ground. Pacing was good. Post again.

Now I regret not having had the time to edit it :/

Congratulations Confucus! I enjoyed working with your story and will do so again any time! :)

... I enjoyed your story immensely.