All Comments on 'Last Mission Ch. 05'

though honestly still way too short

Your series is not bad. it's written very well and you keep your readers on edge.

The only problem I see here is that this is a sexual library and up until now the only sexual action you described was in two lines stating she met 4 to 5 men a night.

Disappointing. You should post these stories in a place more appropriate for them rather than teasing the readers here. :\

I just wish the chapters weren't so short. I disagree with the anonymous poster below about the lack of sex. There are many stories on Lit that are slow in the sex department as chapters build character and plot development, and that certainly doesn't deter my enjoyment. Overall, I like the storyline and your main character, both intriguing, and I hope you finish it. I'd love to see her get her revenge against all her foes, especially Paul.

Thanks for sharing.

Always hanging on your stories CC .

"She squeezed the trigger calmly, dropping him with two shots to the head."

Yessss.....