All Comments on 'Last Train'

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And you telegraphed if by paragraph 6!

I wouldn't worry about similar stories having been written before. After all, how many truly new plots are there? Fundamentally, all of literature can probably be summarized in a dozen or less plots. So, what matters is the style of the writing, the word choice, the tone, the pacing, and all those other things that distinguish good writing from crap.

--- but well written and entertaining. More.

It was well written, but I didn’t find any entertainment in it at all.

You should be beheaded for that one.

Why should I be beheaded 26thNC ?

So I could turn into a brainless moron like you ?