All Comments on 'Late Back Ch. 03'

A lot of stories on here skip the best part of taboo stories... the slow build and the breaking of barriers. Excellent job up to this part. Can't wait for more!

I thought you were done with Ch. 02 and it was a dud! This one is getting good, back (almost) to the standard set by Ch. 01. Now I'll have to come in the Incest section on a regular basis and see when you finish this. Thanks.

12/18/2017

... and chapter 5 is being worked on and I will hopefully finish this week. Not sure yet if there will be a chapter 6, quite possibly. Thanks to all for reading and voting.

Where is chapter 4? You said it's been submitted but I can't find it

I can't find chapter 4?

... but hasn't yet been approved by the site moderators. It was 3 days ago, should be very soon now. They might be a bit short-handed with Christmas, etc, don't really know how the process works in detail.

Love to see people with real skill show up here, even though certain types complain. But I also love to nitpick...since when does "turning a cheek kiss into a mouth kiss" involve stickng your tongue out and licking the other person's mouth? Seems like kind of a big jump considering the circumstances. Why not a gentle kiss....then he lingers, and they kiss again, and then maybe some tongue. Although as far as I'm concerned the tongue isn't even necessary until one is well on their way. I'm sorry, I always find some trivial thing to question. And it's usually stupid compared to what's happening in the rest of the story. I'll be lookng forward to Ch.4. Although maybe I'll just wait a while and hope to find a complete story waiting for me. I can't deal with installments; I never even watch TV shows until the whole season is finished so I can just watch the whole thing without having to wait. =P

Being the father of a pretty young lady can be a struggle even more so when single. Great story, look forward to reading more. I appreciate your and your Muse's imagination and abilities to bring it to your story. Thank you for sharing your vision and talents.