All Comments on 'Late Night and a Broken Ball'

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verybigoneverybigoneover 8 years ago
Great Story

I hope there is a part two, when mom comes!

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Hot but Confusing

At the beginning, it was his Aunt Lauren who called, and Carol Anne was Jimmy's cousin, but at the end her mother was Marianne. Who was sister to who? And who were cousins? If her mother was Marianne, why was Aunt Lauren the one who called? Or was Lauren the mother of Marianne and the grandmother of Carol Anne? (So was he going to fuck his sister or his cousin?) Hot story anyway, but a little inconsistent.

ansdguyansdguyover 8 years ago
This girl...

Is a nympho/slut. It seems like she would fuck anyone with a dick. Not too appealing.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
I'd say I can't wait for the next chapter

But you just posted it so I don't have to. Reading that in 3... 2... 1...

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
LOL!

a pervert and a whore.

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