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AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago

try to not start every sentence with 'he' next time.

DWornockDWornockabout 12 years ago
After deducting 2 stars for the wrong catagory which should be "Loving wives"

I rated it 3 stars.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago

Liked it, very simple, although some repetition of words e.g. 'lip/lips' in consecutive sentences, which made it mildly irritating.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
Dworncock

You are an idiot, you can't even spell category correctly.

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Hello there, I am an Indian and also currently living in India. I am an ardent fan and also a voracious reader of romantic fiction. And this is my first attempt at writing erotica. Hopefully, you will enjoy reading my submissions here. Looking forward to your feedback and c...