by LadyCypris
this was a really good story, there could have been more detail and I hope to read more from u, I really hope u write more stories and I m sure they will be better and hotter as u write them, thank u
hopefully you will keep writing and post them ASAP
only thing would of liked is a bit more of a back story,(not just parents died,aunt got us apartment)
So, is Em now prego or not? Will we hear more of the story of Em and Ian? And is Em short for Emily, Emma, or something else? Nice touch, Em getting off from the vibrations of the washer, setting her up for Ian's attentions.
Give Ian the sexy characteristic of chest hair -- just enough for his sister to stroke ever so lovingly.
plus some romance-worth following up with more chapters on them-nicely written-thanks
Enjoyable but a little more build-up would have been nice. Keep writing, definitely.
Loved it. Had just the right amount of tenderness to make it endearing, and had plenty of what everybody turned up for to read. : )
it should have concluded with, "even before he pulled out, i knew i was pregnant with My brothers baby." that would have made it really hot.