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Click hereAs she lay soaking her poor aching body in the bath she ticked off the tasks that lay ahead, she prayed that it wouldn't take too long to set in motion, and that she would survive until she could get away. Her appearance would have to change, as well as her name. Her lovely long hair cut off and dyed another colour, black to match the photo in Mrs J's album when the time came.
A new life, and new look, a new town far away from here, where Robert could never find her, where she could be safe.
*
Next door the couple listened in horror as the screams ripped through the wall, and they heard the insults and crying filter through, muffled but obvious.
"I told you he's going to kill her, maybe we ought to tell someone, the police or someone?"
The man looked at his wife, "I told you, if we interfere he may come at us, you see it all the time on TV. No leave it alone, maybe she'll walk out of her own accord. Just drop it!"
And they turned up the sound of their own television to drown out the shouting and the cries of the woman as her husband carried on raping her next door.
- COMMENTS
Anonymousabout 12 years agoObviously just by the number of stories and length a writing talent but the detail shines thru. The structure could be more joined up and take out the breaks....
unecessary with just a litttle imagination. At this stage the scenary is being set and in most best books the reader has to work a little. As long as there is a smooth continuim and you put in little reminders in later chapters for any salient parts/character. You did not need to do the offset .... unfortunatly such monsters exist and you only have to read enough sex stories on-line to find their excuses in some authors thinking/work. While you pray at the back of yur mind that this is exageration .... it sails close to real life and feels real; apart from the hollywood style offsets for an extra mount of hope. The nice guy interest and the lottery donor make this more fictional than any of the brutality or "sex" (?). We have to think of another word ... just like in the case of 'rape'. Today news included Womens Aid Scotland indicating 50,000 abuse cases last year to merit the award of lottery moneyr family support work. And this excludes the abused men. While obviously this is a worst case scenario I'm sure the worst would be Worse. I was fortunate to have contact and able to offer some small apt support. WA are not in any way haters but the work tests all kinds of human faith.
A final thought would it not be wonderful if NOTW ex & The Sun (surely one of the most inapt titles in all recorded history.. a classic Orwellianism) instead of delving into teachers et al Private Lifes (sadly most of the people receiving recompense are not even in this cat and in most cases actually feature, in current economic straits, reverse Robin Hood, where money paid by 'ordinary punters' for news is used to pay sums to people that already typicaly have money; tho I supose in the case of The Times......IF they used their 'methods' to trace and expose apt violent abusers and published after trials, in writing that did not titilate abuse... one could imagine a fall in the 50,000, no matter how small, and by following sentences reflect on the nature of justice in such cases.
Some at the paper will be shouting such IS featured? Really? How many of the 50,000? What Womens Aid worker does a reg feature? BY THE WAY I SPENT A GOOD NUMBER OF YEARS WORKING IN SCOTLAND, WHILE ALCOHOL REPUTEDLY FEATURES MORE IN DAILY LIFE, AND IS USED TOO OFTEN AS A COVER, IT WOULD BE TOTALLY WRONG EVEN AMONG THE MOST NEEDY ESTATES TO SEE THE SCOTTISH MALE AS MORE VIOLENT PRONE.
Ex stude news editor Regular Sex story reader
vietvetabout 14 years agoSo far so good. A good start at developing the characters.
Personally I hate an abusive male, as my daughter was involved in such a relationship and I can appreciate your development and understanding of such a situation.
I personally almost killed the asshole and he is no longer around and I hope this is where you are headed with this story.
It takes a special kind of a coward to molest a woman or a child and I hope they all rot in HELL.
