All Comments on 'Laura: Initiation of a Submissive Ch. 01'

by Sir_Winston54

Sort by:
  • 8 Comments
AnonymousAnonymousalmost 20 years ago
Loved it!

it brings back sweet memories when i had my first taste of the lifestyle and spent time with my Master. Would love to see what happens over the weekend and how she learns the joys of the sweet submissive life of pleasing and serving her Master and more.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 20 years ago
Bravo

Wonderful writing. I can't wait to read the rest.

MastersallMastersallalmost 20 years ago
Excellent Writing

Such a pleasure to read well written tale of submission makes me hope this is a long and detailed story...

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
loved it

loved your story is looking forward to the next chapter

HB1965HB1965over 16 years ago
Wow!

I can't wait to read the others. Very good. I loved the part where he had her show off her cunt.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
ohhhh yum

At last a new and exciting story!

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Very good start

Thank you for writing this story. I loved that he took possesion of her as soon as she entered the restaurant. Most first meetings are tame, and lame in my opinion. The fact that he had her exhibit herself to a stranger makes me hopeful that he will

be sharing her w/ strangers before the end. Loved it!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
More!!

Love it!! Hope to hear more soon! Well done!

Anonymous
Our Comments Policy is available in the Lit FAQ
Post as:
Anonymous