All Comments on 'Laura Likes It'

Nicely done. I had no trouble imagining myself in Laura's place, with a couple little exceptions: you never switch from ass to pussy without washing first and (speaking for myself, at least) I have to be extremely aroused to let anything in back there. That is, if I've just cum, it would be a while before I'd let anything as big as a cock back inside my butt.

But I did find this story quite arousing!

Way too long fell asleep twice reading it.

Very good. I liked this story, loved the detail, and the way it flowed.

You have improved. This over all is better than reaming Robyn. Thanks so much. v

Love the premise and the framework of your story! Great characters and super hot action! Two things keep it from being a hall of fame candidate for me --

- Might want to check word usage - many descriptive terms not used ...quite... correctly, and this is jarring, because the rest of the story is so incredibly good!

- Also really need a hygiene break between back door and front door - that's never a good idea.

Keep writing and bringing us the great action!

but the infidelity part stings, so killed it for me.

This was biology, not erotica. You give no reason why Laura suddenly wants to be sodomized by someone she hasn't seen for twenty years.

Could have been over in 2 1/2 pages

I enjoyed all the graphic and hot anal sex, would have liked a bit more varied language and more of a back story - the possibilities are there for these two mature people