All Comments on 'Laura Roft: Piss Raider'

Excellent work. Very well written. Loved it.

The pis de resistance.This story would stand up without the piss element.Well written and exciting.

I particularly like the way Laura likes to impose Herself on Her surroundings by pissing everywhere and marking Her territory.So many Womyn are taught to be very circumspect about peeing in public and I feel She is exercising Her right to control of the public space.

The writing is superb and the use of language good.I will read the follow ons with relish.

I guess it takes all kinds; I'm certainly as kinky as anyone. But just solo pissing? The story was so slow to develop, and there didn't seem to be a point. She escaped. So what? She always escapes. But with no penalties...in kind?