All Comments on 'Laura's Dream'

What a lovely thing for a husband to do for his wife. This is romance between loving married people. This is the place for it ignore idiot anon comments. It was a nice short entry in to the lit site.

maybe this is something they have talked about and wanted to do

thought was a good read

lady shield could do a part 2 and add more fun to the dream

Thanks for sharing your story it's very different and very entertaining.

Imaginative, passionate and arousing. But try to avoid "she felt" and just describe what she's feeling (eg she felt his cock soften in her mouth = his cock softened in her mouth).

I very much enjoyed thi story. It was good for a first try.