All Comments on 'Laura's Horrible Wonderful Day'

You've got continue this, it teased to perfection !

Hope you continue with this story, very sexy so far

And I would be mad if you do not continue fast!

She looks at the guy and wants to fuck him but says I am married I cant. Then on the cam phone she shows her husband the guys pick and he says, looks like your type. Does that mean she is a total slut and has fucked around before? Then he just tells her to fuck the guy. Yep every husband out of nowhere tells his wife to fuck a guy especially in an interractial situation (why isnt this in IR?). Personally I have nothing against people whose spouse consent with swinging or dating outside the marriage. But in the case described, first time, no reluctance, husband suddenly agreeing, possibility of HIV/AIDS or STDs, it makes no sense at all unless she and her husband are both on drugs.

Anybody really have that conversation with their wife, really if your wife called you tonight and started this conversation would it go like this? Are men and husbands today this fucked up? Yikes!

Men allow thier wives to fuck who they want and people praise them for it? I'm sorry but if my wife phoned me up and said some one just fingered me to climax and then asks me if I would be mad if she fucked him? Well the marriage would end there. Her bags would be packed and kids would be in my custody and I would sue the garage for imprpoer conduct with a customer. How ever as this writer is probably a swinger or worse yet a wimp cuck I am sure he will enjoy cleaning her up afterwards.

Another wimp/slut story. The frightening thing is that half of the readers who responded thought this was a wonderful story.

I guess that's why perverts keep writing. They have fellow perverts who think their stories are great.

the Ct. Yankee

piss off the asses w/o a name and drive themwild and to help offest the bad votes they give. Ifg they are dumb ewnough to read these stories which they hate, and they are that fucking dumb, then we will write more and reply and vote to fuck your brain and heart. What a sad ass w/o a name you are to keep pissing yourself off about these stories.

Once again some assholes are looking for a classic novel. HEY ASSHOLES, this is a erotic story site, if you want to live in a REAL fantasy world go find Alice and live in her Wonderland, leave this site for people who love erotic raunchy stories. This was HOT, HOT, HOT and can't wait for her to go back & fuck the mechanic, keep it up, I sure know some of those critics can never get it up!!

literotica is full of bad writers and copycats..this is a story remade and appeared in KRISTENS collection in 2002

its still a BAD story

continue.

To the critics who panned this story; if you don't like wife stories get the fuck off the site. Great prose, love the thill of consensual cheating.

Keep typing bud and don't pay attention to the ass faces who are "Anonymous".

Not every body likes swingers and cucks or sluts and the husband is a cuck and the wife is a slut.

They live in thier own sick work and complain that some people still have some type of ethics, morals, or just perhaps character. I especially like the ass w/o name that complains about people that read that havent registered. I assume that that one anony is just talking about himself but he does sound a lot like one WWWbutcantgetany individual. Since when does swinging, erotic stories, or even open marriage require that someone totally be unrealistic and braindead? A story can very very erotic without being totally stupid or insane. As one famous man once said, let god sort them out later. This story was erotic it was a tragedy that will eventually destroy the marriage, the husband, and the wife. No minute of pleasure is worth a ruined life.

I would tell Laura to fuck him good and bring me home a creampie!! YUMMY!!!

You have to wonder if the cretins who post anonymous complaints about anonymous posters realize how moronic they are?

Why on earth do people read these stories and then bash on the (lack of) moral content?? Was there ANY chance whatsoever that you DIDN'T know going in that this was going to turn into a story about a wife who fucks someone other than her husband? Any chance at all?? Was the story's teaser line too much of a clever subterfuge for you? Were you lulled into a false sense of security, thinking this would just be a story about a poor wife having car troubles? Were you shocked and appalled once you read the story?<p>

Is there anybody here who is still unclear as to what the "Loving Wives" description means??<p>

People, "Loving Wives" SPECIFICALLY means...hold on here, this is a going to be a shock to your system...WIVES WHO FUCK OTHER MEN! If the moral character of the people in such stories upsets you so much then why the fuck do you read those stories? Why do you willingly put yourself through such moral depravity?? Even worse, why do you comment and vote on these stories?? Do you people understand that you're supposed to comment on the quality of the story, not the moral character of the people in the story?? Is that too difficult to grasp?<p>

If you so desperately need wives to remain faithful (on a website devoted to fuck stories! LOL!!) then why don't you simply ignore the "Loving Wives" genre and stick to the category that's designed specifically for you: "Romance"<p>

Your Moral Judgement Meter should remain calm if you'd stick to those stories, and everybody can live happily ever after.<p>

Hell, since you apparently like to torture yourselves maybe "Romance" isn't even the right genre for you. Maybe you ought to just stick to the "B&D" genre. See, I hate "Non Consent", "B&D" and "Ineterracial" stories. Therefore, check this shit out: I avoid those stories! Maybe I should follow your lead though, eh? Maybe I ought to cruise those stories and drop a bunch of undeserved "0" scores on the lot of 'em, just 'cause I "morally" disapprove of such behavior...right??<p>

Painfully fucking stupid, people. Grow up.<p>

As for the story itself, it was decent. It was obviously a bit cliched, what with the god like black stud whom we all know will soon be sporting a comically elephantine porn cock the likes of which poor little wifey has never imagined. Also the ending was a bit contrived. It was such a short story that there was no reason to leave it hanging there like it was some sort of cliffhanger. We all know where this one's headed; there's no real suspense here. This was such a short story that the author should've just continued on and finished it. It still would've only been a two pager; three at most.<p>

Oh, and no, this isn't some cowardly "anonymous" public comment from someone in the peanut gallery who doesn't even post stories of his own. If you wish to pick a bone with me regarding these comments please feel free to contact me at stevieraygovan@yahoo.com. It oughtta be a hoot.

Stevie who rattled your cage? Just get off your high horse and let readers do and say what they like. You and 99.9% of people on this site are swingers,cucks,sluts, and wimps but a small group pf people like to be honest with thier comments. And yes some of us do have stories on this site. I was asked a question a month back by someone who read one of my comments I left on a story about a year ago. The comment was something like "Only writers can comment becasue they have put the effort in to writeing a story so they know how it feels" That may or may not be true but if writers are the only people who can comment what would be the point of public feedback?

So Stevie go back to your slut wife stories which is what you write. And in actual fact the catorgory should be changed to cheating slut stories. Just as any stories with cucks or wimps in them should called Cuck and Wimp stories.

I'll tell you why: Because you're afraid to stand behind your comments. You post stories but you don't have the balls to sign your public comments. Outstanding.<p>

Pretty outstanding of the rest of you douchebags too who just went through my entire list of stories and sabotaged all of them with a bunch of horrible scores. Valiant effort, pussies. Do you feel better about your cowardly selves now, knowing you sabotaged the scoring on some of the highest rated stories here?<p>

So, not only are you dumber than dirt for going out of your way to read stories you know you'll hate and for not realizing that your personal moral juudgements have no place in the voting but it's also plainly obvious that you're such pussies that you have to sit down to take a piss.<p>

Anonymous comments and sabotage votes. Outstanding moral character you've shown here. Be proud, spineless wimps, be very proud.

Every reader has a right to their opinion. You dont have to agree with them or even like it. Writers write to have their stories read, if you dont want to have people read them keep them in the word on your pc, they will be safe there. Most folks that read on Lit are registered with false nicks to hide behind, some just dont register for whatever reason they have, does one or the other make a difference, no it doesnt. I am sorry your definition of Loving Wives is very skewed. It includes stories of wives making love to their spouses, couples that swing together, couples that have real open relationships, and spouses that care for each other. It is not limited to cheating wives, whores, deprived women, nor mentally ill women who do things to destroy themselves, their spouse, their marriage, or their lives. Yes, some of those stories are erotic and some are very good. Does that mean everyone will think so on every story, no it doesnt. And if someone based on their concept of reality rate a story poorly the writer should learn something and attempt to improve if they really are trying to write rather than push a particular agenda. If you call attention to yourself readers may go to your site, I havent read any of your stories and reading what you wrote here probably wont, and if they dont like the material they will so state. Good luck, you need it.

I loved this story and look forward to the next one. For those who leave negative comments, if these stories are not your cup of tea, why read them? It is one thing to leave constructive criticism, which would be acceptable, and quite another to push a self-righteous moral agenda by spewing profanities, character judgements and name calling. These stories are meant for mature audiences, if you can't leave mature comments, perhaps you shouldn't be reading these stories. I suggest Mother Goose or Cat in the Hat.

Holy cow, I hope you plan on continuing this story! You just can't leave us hanging here......lol....I love the texting between the husband and wife....the anticipation of what might happen next....

This could be the beginning of a pattern with the wife finding extra play while the husband squirms and waits for her to come home with a full description of what she just did......please...................keep writing!

Hey! Hubby is all for it. Go for it. Get that big black cock.