All Comments on 'Laura's Rules for the Dare'

At least be realistic for Pete's sake. Totally moronic. How old are you? 5 maybe. A very slow 5 most likely. Made me want to vomit.

Total agreement, waste of effort if you are not going to use at least some brain cells. You will make a great author for the LW section, another crappy story writer.

Thank you for your wonderful comments. Unfortunately I do not yet have a story outlined for the LW section. It is on my todo list though

This is an excellent story. A little more lust being kindled in each of the girls for the fathers attentions would have been better, but the base story is solid.

Just dumb.

Terrible

I will try that but I have some doubts.

As for the rest of the story; just plain ridiculous.

Pretty bad.

The biology, the dialog, the characters... Just not good.

This is the second incredibly stupid story I read through to the end tonight. I don't know which is worse, the story or the fact I kept reading it.

7 girls all 18 or 19 and all virgins. Not very realistic.

Dad letting 7 young girls hold him down...I do not think so.

Screwing 7 tight your girls and 7 climaxes within an hour..don't think so.

All seven having babies and no parents getting any of the girls to tell it was one of the fathers.

I did like the fantasy of 7 hot young women fucking a Dad. What a fun fantasy.

a good short story I don't know why people are bitching about it this isn't a college writing course so too much obsession with realism is the real ridiculousness

Just a word of encouragement for the author. Many former Special Education students, such as you, have gone on to productive lives. You WILL find your niche in this world. Maybe in an abandoned building or maybe on a steam grate.

I tried the abandoned building AND stream grate. Apparently I brought the property value of the building down so low they had to pay people to look at it, and the stream grate was downgraded to a recorded mediocre, and they had to let me go.

Do you have any other suggestions, Anonymous?

Please?

I like the way this went. Dad wasn't forced and you are not spec ed. These anonymous comments are from haters. Another chapter would be good. Maybe another Dad or a brother this time. Maybe even some more serious lezzie action.

Good story, though the beginning part where they held the father down at first, really got me. Glad to see he was able to become a willing participant and enjoy it latter.

I really like this one, please, it needs a continuation.

Ignore all the haters. If they dont like it, they should quit reading it (they must have a crappy imagination, tou dont time fill in every detail). While there could be improvements, it's not supposed to be a dissertation. I liked it. Please do a 2nd part. Thanks

Great Story, just one question where was the wife when the Truth or Dare Game was happening and what did she say when she found out about all of the pregnancies. Well Done 5++stars

Another prime example of Western peer pressure crap. Ugh.

Fun story, which then goes to shit with pregnancy.

What was this trash this was pathetic bring in the dad and all the girls fucking him it's unrealistic again it's pathetic do us a favor don't write anything else don't embarrass yourself anymore

They ruined their lives just to get out washing someone's clothes or cleaning their room. Where does it end? "Hey Georgia, I dare you to let my dad fist both your holes at the same time, right up to his elbow!" "Hey Laura, I dare you to let me cut your left hand off!" Or how about getting a brain and saying"No! Go fuck yourself!"

Retarded.

Yes, a stupid but funny story. With the pregnancies sick. Who would T - D a daughter to fuck her dad, and yes, where is mom in all this?