All Comments on 'Lauren Adams Ch. 01'

by EtherealGenesis

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DesertPirateDesertPirateover 17 years ago
Very good start

Very good first story, I hope you continue. A bit more on what kind of relationship with Christina would help. I wish you luck, this could turn into a great story, the pieces are there I can't wait to see how you put them together.

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