All Comments on 'Lauren, Twelve'

Great ending!

5

Really like the “slices of life” approach 💥💥💥💥💥

Kind of boring. I'm not sure how this is worthy of an H rating.

Pretty good overall. But I do hope it's over.

After all the criticisms, where's LitCrit?

This was both long and unremarkable. 1 page chapters don't really work for me. Had the accident not been mentioned in this part I would not even have remembered how the story started. Average 3 star effort.

Lovely story, after painfully reading each chapter a day at a time I just read through all 12s in a row. I think this would be better reposted as a single story that combined would be a solid ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

I think a solid ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️ slice of life!!

Didn't hear any barking from Bogart so he must get along with Danny. Five Stars all along the way. Very much enjoyed the short chapters.