All Comments on 'Lauren's Experiment'

when the male character's name changed from Sam to Ted briefly. Good story, though, would like more, but bad editing can be distracting and take away the flow of a good tale, however small it may be.

The whole story was great. Perfectly detailed, but Sam's dialogue was lacking. It just seems like something a 18 year old douchebag would say instead of a dominant.

...but the other comment is quite right. The man needs to be more than just a dildo without a brain. Give him some sexuality and individualism

Ass to cunt multiple times are you kidding I guess he really thinks she's a slut as he does not care about her health

Sorry, but pussy to ass to pussy, etc. just leads to painful infections. Not a turn on at all.

That was exceptionally erotic! The way you built it up and brought it to completion was fantastic!! I couldn't keep my fingers out of my snatch once he pushed into her mouth! Thank you!

P.S. sorry for the fact that some people can't accept reading fiction without injecting reality ... They call it fiction for a reason, otherwise it would be non-fiction lol

Very good story. Nice slow erotic build up with a good finish.