All Comments on 'Lauren's First Day'

Great first story... I liked the idea and how her mom had craved her for a long time. I hope you write a 2nd chapter of what happens that night...

grate starte would like to read more of this story it will open up her miend ty leann xx

The daughter's progression from "Eww, no! Masturbation is gross!" to immediately getting undressed when her mother just randomly tells her to is too rushed. Might want to tone down the unrealistic reactions a bit.

Had lots of potential, but could've had more length. Good though!

I agree this story had a lot of potential. Would love for there to be a continuing episode. Maybe even bring mom home a friend to play with.