All Comments on 'Laurie's First'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Sorry...

This was the fucking most stupidest story I've ever read! Words fail me.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
so close

in all ways this story was so close to being great.

Explore, delve into the next act... and perfection.

so close...

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