All Comments on 'Lawn Service'

You've got a nice story, but second person is very difficult for the reader to red.

Not sure why poorly rated - perhaps because a bit short - but enjoyable story none the less. I would rather have a bit short than so many others so gosh darn wordy. I would like to see a follow up, perhaps with the guy next door who saw some of it and wants a sample.

The lawn gets groomed trimmed and fertilized and the wife got fertilized herself probably as part payment.

Another lame story about a cheating whore.