by vanpeebles
This Was Very Sexciting And I Loved It.
Please, Continue The Lobve Story Of
Kate & Becky Finding Each Other.
Well written and completely believable. I don't know what your first draft looked like, but this one sucked me in. I really loved how you portrayed both characters silent fears. While this story definately can stand on it's own, you've done such great back ground on these characters in such a short period of time, I would love to see what else you have in store for these two.
Sweet! really surprising last comment 11 yrs ago
Good Becky found an experienced rug muncher for her first time
...and LOVED she had a full muffin, tho doubtless she'll shave to be like Kate
liked it a lot...