by lovelyladyfaire
Seems to me that you've already mastered the written word, so only the best seller remains. By all means, GO FOR IT!
I love your writing.
Being a dirty old man, I really liked your choice of characters. 5*
Your narrative is fluid and you engage your readers in a captivating sequence . . One of the best stories I 've read ..
What would it have taken to reach "Perfection" ???
Though I sit here with cock firmly in hand, your word wizardry is stupendous. Great job
You always please my need for the thrill by thrill mounting explosion that fills our souls with lust. Thank you