All Comments on 'Layover'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
one night stand

They fit together and might stay together

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terriblekiwiterriblekiwiover 6 years ago
Very saucy

Yum - I do like where this story is going. Build it up and spank HARD!

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
More please!

I really liked this one....hoping for another chapter!

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
More!

Hope you'll follow-up with another chapter, after all he still has to land his plane on her anal runway!!

CitidiverCitidiverover 6 years ago
More

Please. Let us see where you go from here. An excellently crafted tale that can stand alone, as the finely crafted blend of S/M, Dom/Sub and tenderness that it is.

Barbwire2016Barbwire2016over 6 years ago
Owned.

I'm a fan, you own me now.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Please

Please keep writing your story is the perfect blend of hotness and masterful sex

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Good Story Captain....

I've had many a layover but none to compare to this. Checklist complete.....

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