All Comments on 'Leader of the Pack Ch. 06'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Very Hot!!! Please give us some more.

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Love it!

i like spots, especially leopard spots ;) love the story, love the pace, love where this story is going, just continue!

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Gimme More

Again, I love this story. Thanks for my daily fix. Gimme Me More. You are a very talented writer. I can't wait to see where you take us next.

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Stripes

not sure why but would prefer stripes, lol, is a great story cant stop reading it

TyreeTyreeover 16 years ago
let's see... dark brown hair, pale, blue eyes....

I think either a snow leopard or a siberian tiger. Of course tigers are enormous... much bigger than wolves! The love(lust?) scene in this chapter was great. I really like that they're mis reading each others wants/needs - just like real life lovers do. Well done

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
OH MORE!! PLEASE!!

I AM def leaning toward siberian tiger. Since the tiger is the largest cat on earth and it just seems to fit with her. Strong confident and sure! That and we all know tigers are cool! (-:<

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
He called her his fair darling

so I'm thinking a light-colored cat, maybe an Asian golden cat (those are beautiful). Or perhaps a cougar (mountain lion)?<br><Br>

I'm glad the comments have kept you writing this story, because I am really loving it. The morning sex scene between Aislinn and Cullen was perfect. A little tentative, a little teasing, then a whole lot of passion. I love the realism, the fact that they've got all this pent up desire and so their first time doesn't last long, but it's fiery hot for as long as it lasts. <br><br>

More please!

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
UUUUUMMMM?????? BOTH??????

I think both. But if I had to chose......spots. no stripes. no spots. no strips. nevermind whatever you make her i'm sure will be perfect.

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
whaou i love this

hey so i'd definitly go for the snow leopard.

and i love your storie please let it be a long one ^^

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
stripes definitly stripes

great story can't wait for more keep it up.

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Fantastic Chapter! Stripes or spots...

Because of her coloring and what he called her in Gaelic, I'm leaning towards a Cougar. Also, when they are born their eye color is a striking blue. Hope this helps and please post another chapter soon :)

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
I'm going to have to go with neither...

I see her as strong, confident and regal and when I think of that I see her as a lioness, simply because they are the true leaders of the packs. They are the hunters and the care takers, she just seems like that type plus they are incredibly beautiful but really any of the large cats is amazingly powerful and beautiful so any would suit her. Whatever you decide please do so quickly so that we can get another dose soon. I'm feeling withdrawl setting in and I just finished the chapter.

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Great Chapter...Please post another one very soon.

NorCalGirlNorCalGirlover 16 years ago
I'm missing this story

I hope you will be posting more soon!

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Please

Please please please write more of this sorry - I think it is great

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Please more chapters soon! This is such a good

story!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
Get yourself published!

Only part way through and it's as good or better that what is found in the bookstores! Being a fan(atic) of Sci Fi Fiction/fantasy, I think this is a #1 great read. Keep it up!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
great work!

Hey, who are you and where did you come from yourself, ms. author? I am actually pretty amazed at your story. It's fun, interesting, and pretty damn readable for a rough draft. Readable not as in "that's pretty good for a hooey on the internet," but as in "that's pretty good work. For anybody." For amateurs of any art I've read something to the effect that "the wonder is not in what they did, but that they did it at all," and actually, that just does not apply to you.

~Melissa

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
Dry opinion

Great misleading of the reader. I really didn't expect it.

Alpha_MarmAlpha_Marmover 12 years ago
very interesting

Rafe is an intriguing character. Makes the reader eager to find out what his game is. So looking forward to finding out.

Love the feline component...they really are inifinitely more mysterious than................

oneboobeeoneboobeeabout 12 years ago

You are awesome!!!! I am loving this couple and how they are discovering one another.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
Great writing...

If you continue writing the plot in such a way with a the thrills, suspense and what not, I hope it can be made into a movie....I like your storyline so far....make it so that there'll be room for sequels, and pre sequels too. Enjoyed it thus far...Keep up to good work...all the best.

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