All Comments on 'Leader of the Pack Ch. 10'

you nailed it! (and he nailed her) and Grandma hit the nail right on the head. Way to tie it all together. The different aspects of your tightly woven plot are coming together...so many threads in your tapestry. I believe you've surpassed some of our 'favourite' serial writers here at Literotica- kudos.

Brinah does not mess around. Cullen and Aislinn need to stop having sex long enough to have a serious discussion! LOL. One of them is going to have to be the brave one and be the first to say "I love you dammit!"

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I am waiting eagerly for Jenna to exact her revenge on Rafe, and that will be a sweet moment. Great story and great update!

I love Brinah. lol She is just awesome. ::D I can't wait to see if Cullen gets the balls to confess his love. Please update soon. (will beg is need be) ^-^

This story just gets better with every new chapter! Please update again shortly, and i too will beg if need be.... Darn fine job, keep up the good work!

awesome chapter ......

Wheww IT'S Gettin' Hot or is it just me! keep em' cummin'

LOL I saw it coming the moment they started in in the library. But you are an awesome writer and I am highly amused.

I am so enthralled with this story. I can't wait to see what happens next. I wish that Cullen and Aislinn would just talk and tell eachother their feelings.

Could you please tell Lit to publish faster. I log in daily to see if you are posted. ITs just too good of a story. I really think you should consider writing this story into a book. I know that I would buy it. You really are a great writer.

It's time for Cullen to shit or get off the pot! He's a leader...lead! Take Aislinn by the hand and do it. Both of them will feel much better once he does.

Great chapter though. I love the interaction between Keith, Sarah and Brinah...

P.S. Keith and Sarah are the names of my Godparents and when I read their names together, it makes me smile...

Grandma Brinah, ain't no punk!!! I almost felt sorry for Cullen...You have the confrontation was everything one would expect...I can't wait until the next chapter. To bad Lit won't release more than one chapter a day!

Some spelling errors, but love Brinah. Great character. Go granny!

Awww this story is so addicting... I have been anticipating the whole day coming home to read it and now its almost 1:30am.... I just keep telling myself one more chapter... GREAT JOB!!!

Your story has me completely addicted! The best part in this one was when Grandma walked in on them sleepin in the chair and everthing after that! I laughed so hard just picturing the scene in my head. I could fee the emotions of all involved, You are so very talented with Your words!

OMG! LOVE IT!

Your story has me completely addicted! The best part in this one was when Grandma walked in on them

i would add, use more proofreading, dont soley rely on spellcheckers, there have been so far too many miss words, some english words that sound the same have so different meaning that they break the (suspension of disbelief) and detract from the story. that is such a shame with such a good story

I am so glad I found you. You are very talented. I am compleatly addicted. This is truely one of the best stories I have ever read and I read alot. Thamk you for sharing it with all of us.

This chapter is the funniest thing I've read in a long time.

I loved the children being caught in the after glow by the grandmother.....Young man what are your intentions with my granddaughter? lol

I knew they were gonna gonna get caught by the grandmom! That was so hilarious!

Best exhibitionist scene. Ever!

Got caught by grandma. Lol

Hahahahaha... by far the best chapter yet!!! Great job! I can't help but adore the grandma, and Keith just made my day. Grinning like an idiot here. :D

Grandma is being a bit too uppity. She forfeited her right to have much of a say when she hid her granddaughter's identity from her.

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Of my own Gramdmothers....*giggles* love her to pieces.

I have spent the last 2 days reading your book. Your story flows, characters are solid, and I've had a couple three laugh out loud moments. "you can open your eyes now possum", bloody hilarious!

I can't wait to finish this book to see how it all plays out. Love your writing style and look forward to reading anything and everything from you!

I loved the fact that the grandmother caught them having naked post-coital snuggles.

Too funny, keep up the good work, I'm enjoying this story very much.

Been reading this story every chance I've gotten for the past 24 hours. This chapter had be busting up laughing in the DMV . I'm quite positive no one has ever cracked a smile there. On to the next chapter.... Thank you !

The scene with Aislinn's grandmother is priceless!

oh no! I accidentally clicked 1 star, it's supposed to be 5 stars! I really enjoy your writing <3

She and cullen are starting to get irritating...

-jaye-