All Comments on 'Leaders of the Pack Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
yay!

its back! i love your stories about this lovely couple.

must say though the vision has me on the edge of my seat.

GlosUKGlosUKover 15 years ago
Brilliant

It is great to see Cullen and Aislinn again. PJ xx

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
The wait was too long

Yes! The couple is finally here again! The wait was too long. I'm rubbing my hands in anticipation. The visions are scary...who's Natasha?

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
The wait was too long

oops... what i meant to say was Who's NATALIE? :-D

baikalisanbaikalisanover 15 years ago
Woot!

Soooooooo happy your writing about these two again!! I anticipate more in the near future!!! CANT WAIT!

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
OMGGGGGGGGGGG!!!

I was reallllllly shocked when I see this title .. Oh my god I even missed this title :D lolll... Keep posting pleaseeee ..

WELCOME BACKKKKKKKK

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
WELCOME BACK!!!!!

This is an all time fav. so thrilled you picked up the pen on the Leader of the Pack series, look forward to reading the next post. Blessings.

TricialenTricialenover 15 years ago
So When's the Movie Coming Out?

Yes, it is that good. You pulled me right back into their lives and I am waiting with curiousity for explantions of how did Mira end up here? Who's Natalie? And what's up with Jenna stealing babies? And how soon will we get to learn more......?

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
funny thing is...

i JUST came across leader of the pack, and spent the past two nights reading through it. imagine my surprise when lo and behold, theres a new submission to continue the story just as I've finished reading the first.

im ecstatic and i can't wait for the rest.

SmallwandaSmallwandaover 15 years ago
Well done

Well written and so far I can't see any problems with editting. Oh and I REALLY REALLY REALLY LOVED IT. It was like meeting old friends. Great Job.

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Awesome I missed Aslinn

I missed Cullen and i can't wait to hear about the babies.

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
AWeSOME

LOVE YOUR STORY. so original and classy. lol

keep up the good work.......

cant wait to see what kind of babies will come out

ShadowedDreamsShadowedDreamsover 15 years ago
Another vote for "The wait was too long"

Okay so we shouldn't try to hurry a good story, but I still don't like having to wait.

Liked the first chapter and looking forward to getting to know Natalie. (won't ask who she is as I am sure you will tell us in good time)

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
i dont like waiting... :(

im so glad your back again with this i was so wondering about jenna. this is going to be an awseome story im so excitted. im hoping it will be just as good if not better than the first one!!!! i still dont like waiting i wanna read more!!!!

whymightiwhymightiover 15 years ago
You are good!

Another winner! Congrats!

scaperdeagescaperdeageover 15 years ago
^_^

Glad to see you've continued with this series. Can't wait for more!

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
SO Excited!!

I have been hoping for more on Cullen and Aislinn!! Now I will have to TRY to be patient. I can't wait to see where this story leads us! Thank you for coming back to them.

whymightiwhymightiover 15 years ago
You are a keeper!

I love your stuff.

gaallygaallyover 15 years ago
YAY!!!!! Glad your back!!

OMG!! So very happy your back. I can't get enough of LOTP!

cantfightfatecantfightfateover 15 years ago
Yay! So glad you're back!

I'm ready for Cullen and Aislinn's next adventure!

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Yeah... YEAH...

Back to action, to excitement, to Cullen and Aislin. Is it possible that Rillan & Mira survived all these years? Are they hardcore mercenaries? This is gonna be good. I CAN'T WAIT!

Jamie1on1Jamie1on1over 15 years ago
Where are the other stories?

Awesome love your stories. I'm glad there is finally a sequel but where are *Cullen and Aislinn*-The Birth,*Rissa*-

The Kitchens at the Taigh-Oèsda,*Celia and Mack*-Mated,*Keith and Jaylyn*-Life with a Litter,*Aislinn*=

The Druids and Her Powers stories. I would think those stories would come before the sequel.

TaraeFreshTaraeFreshover 15 years ago
GAELIC???

what does muin, coach, pisaegan, and all other gaelic terms you use mean?

sassyGirl1234sassyGirl1234over 15 years ago
grat

but i agree what do all the gelic words mean a839

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
YAY!!

Bring it on! I've re-read LOTP 4 times waiting for the next installment. And enjoyed Mira as well. Please please don't hurt those babies though...I way too menopausal to cope with that.

HypechicHypechicover 15 years ago
It's about time!

Finally, LOTP is back. The story just started and Jenna is already up to her naughty shenanigans..I sure as hell hope nothing happens to those babies..Welcome back.

kittiekimmeekittiekimmeeover 15 years ago
Thank you!

I am so glad that you have started writing more in the LOTP series. It's my favorite of yours and i am so excited it's back!!

wisperingwillowwomanwisperingwillowwomanover 15 years ago
So Happy Your Writing Again

I've been skipping around Literotica for a few years and just came across your story yesterday. I couldn't stop reading it. It's a great story I'm so happy for you with the Book and all I can't wait to make it a part of my collection. Great Story Keep it up Please!!!!

missvixxen08missvixxen08over 15 years ago
There're back!!

Oh! I am so glad they are back for more!! Yeah! I loved it, as always!

missvixxen08missvixxen08over 15 years ago
There're back!!

Oh! I am so glad they are back for more!! Yeah! I loved it, as always!

missvixxen08missvixxen08over 15 years ago
There're back!!

Oh! I am so glad they are back for more!! Yeah! I loved it, as always!

missvixxen08missvixxen08over 15 years ago
There're back!!

Oh! I am so glad they are back for more!! Yeah! I loved it, as always!

Kinseeker23Kinseeker23over 15 years ago
KEEP IT UP!

I have to say that out of all the stories ive read on this sight it is definitly in my top 3 favz Only under Genie Chronicles by Joe Brolly and A Beautiful Wish by 800lbgorrila. I love the whole Celtic back ground in it. and i have to ask if any one has found a good gaelic translater on the net b/c i cant find one. any way im glad your back and gratz on the book and i cant wait to read more. please dont keep us waiting.

-Kinseeker

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Love it

So glad there is another installment, can't wait for the next chapter :-D

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
LOVE IT !!!!

Waiting on the edge of my seat for more!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
hey now..

really liked, keep me interested. but whats up with not posting anymore? i know this is prob a part time thing for you but im soooo curious to see what happens next. keep up the good work and i cant wait to see Ais kick some ass.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
more?

I loved your other stories and was really excited to see this one had started; but when -oh when- will there be an update? You're killing me!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
Great Story

I don't know if your still writing this story or not but i must admit that it is fantastic i stumbeld upon it and i absolutely love it i hope you continue this one

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
When oh When....

When will your next chapter be published? Please let us know!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
I luv ur stories!

There are all great and i cant wait for the new chapter!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
Will there be

More stories? This story is amazing! I'm addicted and can't wait for more!

cantfightfatecantfightfateabout 15 years ago
Ummm.... hello??? Anyone out there?

Please update!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
Great Story Line

I love this series! I like the story line and the characters are really believable. You're a good writer. Write more!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
Keep writing!

I absolutely love your stories. Please keep writing them!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
love at first word

I love everyone of your stories ive read all of them in the last three or four days :) I just really hope you continue with your stories.....I saw its been a while since your last update? :( write some more I'm begging you haha I'm not ready to say goodbye to Cullen and Aislinn (sorry if I spelt her name wrong)

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
Echoing the rest in praise

I read the entire story of the first book in one day and was totally hooked and captivated. You are truly one of the best fanfic writers I've ever encountered. The way you also incoporated Gaelic aspects and certain history into it was also superb. It was truly some of the best and most rewarding reading I've done lately.

It has been a few months since the first chapter went up, and I really am hoping that you haven't abandoned it and would rather believe that you're just trying to figure out where to take the sequel, and I'd imagine there must be plenty of ideas on how to do that, especially in light of the strong foundations you put together with Book 1. But, I'm sure I'll be quite happy with whatever path you choose. Can't wait! :)

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
OMg I'm so happy there's more! =)

Read all the chapters of the first book & I'm ecstatic that their story is continuing!

I just love these two characters and I'd love to get the books whenever their published!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
Thank You

I thought you left us hanging. More please

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
Short and sweet

MORE PLEEEEEAASE!!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
Update soon

Are you ever going to update this becauase you seemingly dropped off the map and I wonder if it's still worth following this story.

sassyGirl1234sassyGirl1234almost 15 years ago
Excited

iv been wating so long for the next chapter hope you get it out soon

swartselswartselalmost 15 years ago
The suspense is working overtime!

Hey Secretme.are you going to submit anything soon?i have almost forgotten about my 2 fave characters!PLEEASE give us some more...?:'(

dinddindalmost 15 years ago
can't get enough

Thanks so much, I really don't want to imagine how I'd cope without my favorite characters.

I hope Leaders of the Pack is going to have quite a few chapters and soon, hopefully. :)

I'd really love to read more about secondary characters such as Keith & Jay, Mack & Celia or, why not, Rissa; maybe in a series of their own?

Thanks again for everything :):)

mtmissymtmissyalmost 15 years ago
I read all the last one as st8 through as possable

But its been a while since you've added more. Are you going to add anything else soon?

I told my DH that I was reading your story and was hooked and he laughed at me b/c I was mad that we kept having things interrupt me! I'm glad that I read it when it was complete so I didn't have this wait though.

I hope to see more soon. I love your story

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
moooooooooooooore!!

please add more stories soon!! its been ages since your last post!

cheers! =)

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
Please Update

I hope that you add more to this story, it was just getting interesting and It was posted in November and it is now June. Please ohhhh please post another chapter!!!!!

Bev

hourihouriabout 13 years ago
Getting My Fix!

Yes!! Thanks for coming back and expanding on the story and Ais n Cull's world. I love that you opened this one up from a different slant altogether, but meshed it so well with the existing one of Ais and Cullen. (Ok, I know I'm reading these late, but! Better late than never, yea? =)

oneboobeeoneboobeeabout 12 years ago

Glad I found you had continued this story!!!!!! Favorite Author!!!!!!!!

morgee190morgee190over 11 years ago
omfg

That was soooooooo bogus to leave it like that !!!!! At least the other chapters are posted or u would have received some intense hate mail. But your still amazing and I love your writing abilities :D

~Morgan <3

ranae1981ranae1981over 11 years ago

Love it keep going!!!!

sofia57sofia57over 11 years ago
I LOOOOVEEEEEEEE ITTTTTT SOOOOOOOOOOO MUCH!!!

I'm sure I've said it before but darling you have one heck of a gift!!!! I got dishes to clean and a floor to mop.... it CAN wait!! lol xoxo

AkoltAkoltalmost 11 years ago
Love this story

I just recently found this story line, and put off doing a lot just to finish it. It is amazing. That being said, i am a bit confused right now, what happened after the cliffhanger in the cabin from honeymoon up until now. Did I miss a story?

dairetodairetoover 10 years ago
hmmm

Not sure if i like how this seems to be going.

wawferwawferabout 10 years ago
In Print?!?!

Please let me know more. My email is NYNIGO2@gmail.com Thanks. Im really happy for you, and im excited about buying the book :D

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
I can't help but laugh.

"Could be raining."

ChasingtheSkyChasingtheSkyover 6 years ago

This is an unfinished story.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Disappointed

Just another author who after getting published forgets all us readers and doesn't bother to finish the stories they promised.It really is to bad because I liked this series and then found out it had been a waste of my time.VERY VERY disappointed in this author I thought she would be better than that.

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