All Comments on 'Leaders of the Pack Ch. 06'

The more I read the more confused I get.

thank you very much

I'm loving it! Can't wait for more. :)

Loving these new chapters and was very happy to see a new chapter so quick after the other one :) hope it keeps up, really wanting to see how it all turns out!

Cant wait to read more about the sexy tattooed man in jeans and Natalie.

I hope you write more about them .

He sounds like a beast;) hehe. I'm so glad you're back I don't care if there is no sex... As long as there's some action later... Lol. I'm so tired of Jenna:/ she gets me heated in all the wrong ways>:( Maybe she'll spontaneously combust!!

The characters are all moving around the chess board as the weres, druids and now vampires take their positions. It's so hard with alphas Cullen and Aislin separated. I can't wait to see what comes next.

It's great to have you back and spinning the tale further. Where you go, we'll follow.

Took a little to get back into the swing of the storyline but enjoying it more.

The story escalates and accelerates with problems. I think that making careful decisions requires cooling down and relaxing with your mate or friends. It doesn't have to be sex, maybe just a comforting gathering in the living room. Late chapters do not have those moments. I think they are essential. Please bring them back. Thank you for your inspiration.

but I'm sad and frustrated for Aislinn and Cullen. I just want them to be together again. They'll think better together. The council is annoying, the feds are annoying... sigh. I guess being a leader isn't so fun after all.

Looking forward to the next chapter. I hope you keep them coming regularly.

Okay the tension between Natalie and Tor is good, hopdully we can definitly get more on those two!! Agree with another comment about jenna, BUT she is also a key character, til she's decapited in the circle.. yeah that sounds right.. have the alpha pair do something gruesome, it seems fitting for the alphas to do something out of the ordinary, i mean c'mon its their kids! CANT WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER! be keeping an eye out for it! Love what your stories are about.

As I read the newest chapters I got confused and reread the whole story. I will say the plot line is very good and interesting. However will you please use the regular submitting mode so there are correct punctuation marks, italics and scene breaks? I also got confused as to who Tor is, I had thought his name was trey that was overseeing Natalie and had all the tattoos. Can you explain please?

I found this chapter more like "Leader....' and find it more complete in its delievery. Keep going. :)

I'm so hoping that your going to take their relationship further.

please....it makes reading that much easier....