All Comments on 'Leap of Faith Ch. 01'

I'm left wondering at the story here, and why the lead male character is so reluctant to be with the girls. The story is good but lack of back story is distracting. I'm continually left with the feeling like I should know why he went to Canada, and why he's playing coy.

Is this really to be a romance? So far it seems like this is headed toward a three-way and then please dont put this in Romance category. Aside from that, you havent given much context to this story.

when will the next story be ready? good read

How did they meet, what are their hobbies etc. The story is sound but needs more verbal interaction between the characters

Great start

Quite enjoyed reading, is this perhaps Part 1 of a longer story.

Wtf… they didn’t continue? It’s been 5 years… you can’t just end it like that! This was way too good! Like what? This would’ve been a gem!