All Comments on 'Learning Curve'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
why?

Why write a story like this and skip nearly every chance to go into detail about their study sessions? It started off great but then quickly became pointless... It's written quite well, just wish you hadn't left all the hot parts out of it. =/

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
incoherent sobs

The story ends right before the climax (pun intended). It's really, really good and then it ENDS RIGHT BEFORE THE CLIMAX. The climax doesn't happen. I couldn't climax. it was pretty damn cute but...

...no climax.

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