All Comments on 'Learning Curve'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago

"she kissed her way down Alicia's next"

Please edit (or have someone do it for you).

Otherwise a sweet story, a bit hurried but a good start. This could have sequels.

boratigersboratigersalmost 11 years ago
what happens next?

what happens next? do they hookup more? does she go on the date? do she and alica become lovers..girlfriends.? please finish this! regardless of the spelling errors and words in the wrong place this was hot! i wanna know what happens next please 8)

boratigersboratigersalmost 11 years ago

please continue this! regardless of the spelling errors and words in the wrong place this was hot! i wanna know what happens next please 8)

SeedyReedySeedyReedyalmost 11 years ago
Wow

I loved it, please write more

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Great start.

Everything was great, I just wanted more and more of it. Please keep writing.

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