by silkstockingslover
Your stories are the best on this site. All hot and really well written. This story could have had several more chapters illustrating more how liz falls more under Kelly's spell and really becomes her exclusive slut pet. Now that would be some hot chapters, I'm sure, to read.
More please!!!
Isn't it amazing how rude comments are always anonymous and usually stupid! A reader should know that if submissive is in the title its probably not a romance story of sweet love at first sight. Get a life.
I am not sure if I should apologise as I am not a member. as in anonymous.
I did not like the boys demanding attitude very nice at all and felt that he got what he deserved.
The girls characters were fun, sensitive when needed and well thought out. I keep being amazed how girls (ladies) talk to each other.
Overall your story is excellent, interesting characters and flowed well.
Thankyou
Hi Miss Jasmine <curtsey>
Another great story with lots of opportunities to get myself off. An when you wrote "Once I was naked, she ordered, "On your knees, slut."
Again, the derogatory term turned me on, conversely if Kevin ever called me such names I would cut his balls off, yet I obeyed Kelly, now staring at her wet cunt as she rubbed her clit." i came wondering if you were channeling me. :)
A few of your recent stories were just sex and that is not the true you. i loved this one as it seemed you got back to the characters and feelings that turn me and all of us on so much.
Love,
Your pet ann
Another great story Jasmine. I was a little disappointed that neither of them wore stockings though. ;)
Loved the story. U R my favorite writer. Hope to read the sequel to like Mommy, Like Daughter.
Thanks.
there's the silk i was missing, one who writes storys about human characters, not embodiments of all that is domme who never lose, and are so cruel it's a wonder they are able to keep any partners short of blackmail
Amazing story and I hope to see a part 2 Jasmine! One of my favorites of your stories
Classic Jasmine style. Deserved much more than 5, if possible, as the rest of this great author's stories and sagas.
This is my first time commenting on this site, but wanted you to know that this was a delightful read and I'm greatly anticipating a part 2!
You keep having my jaw drop and my cock hard, please do go on with this one, incredible story!! Love your writing so much
How better to find out your a submissive than with your best friend who is now your lover.
Got me hot and kept me hot even though this is a lez story! I imagined having you for MY pet sucking and licking my cock and balls until I ejaculated down your throat over and over. Twisted huh? . . .LOL You are obviously a pro-writer slumming here on Literotica. You're very prolific (haven't even read half of your work) and everything I have read is well done! The skill and talent show.
Well written, though I would be more into it if they stuck to each other rather than planning to also fuck a bunch of guys.
'shrugs' different tastes.
My ex gf was like this. We started as friends, but soon she started to tease me, tell me what to wear and playfully spank me in my room. Not long after she spanked me and played with me while she called me names, whispering in my ear. When I had my O, she lightly slapped me on my face and called me more names.
Candy
Dear Silkstockingslover
I have enjoyed many many of your stories, and I have enjoyed all of them.
You are such a talented writer, I hope you keep writing all these good things.
I am an old man, but your writing makes me feel young again,thank you
so much.
Best regards
LEE
Somehow I overlooked this one while reading through your stories during the past couple of months, but I'm very happy to have discovered it. It was an excellent read... the pacing was nearly perfect, the conversations were believable, and of course the sex scenes were - as always - very erotic.
The revenge fucking other guys detracts from the girls. But we already know I prefer my Lesbian/submission stories "sans male" participants!
Really got into the sex scenes and the gradual 'frog in the water' escalation of Kelly's dominance over Liz. The two issues I referred to were; 1) denying the reciprocation of orgasms. Pillow Queens seriously piss me off, reminding me of those assholes in high school carrying a Y chromosome who expect blow jobs as their right yet refuse to go down on you. Furthermore, though I might treat a generic sub in the way Kelly did Liz but would never do so to a friend. 2) The whole revenge gang bang scenario detracted from the story and in reality would almost certainly would not result in any feelings of triumph for Liz, these factors limited my rankings to 4 stars despite some fantastic sex scenes.
it has a good start to it let her have the orgy just ot stick it to her ex then let her go over to totally to Kelly maybe have them room together at colleges so as to truly Lez and Kelly truly find there love in each other arms
. . . to see it end. Loved it. A follow-up would be great. Thanks for the HOT story.
It also didn't help that Kevin, as usual, had barely got me off and I was still horny as hell, so I obeyed and began getting undressed.
"You know the sex between Kevin me is good," I countered, always satisfied by him in the past.
The interplay between these friends is sooo realistic, energetic, believable, wonderful! Mmmm love this.
Another stellar story from my favorite author. Loved the interplay between Kelly and Liz but I think Liz could have been more submissive at the end.
Such natural dialogue and so realistic and so hot! I want them to be domme sub lovers forever.
Great fun reading…I agree on some of the comments, I would never treat a best friend like that…using her without being considered about her own needs… if there is a purpose, it isn’t worked into the story at that moment….
Need to find out more. Hopefully they stay together and liz completely subs to kelly.
306. Love stories featuring pussy, my favorate snack. I assume she became more submissive as time passed. Would like to experience that gangbang of all the boyfriends.
Your ability to articulate a story is what keeps me checking your submissions. This story is well worth another chapter detailing how they not only sought revenge on Kevin, but how Liz succumbs further to being dominated.