by CollarMeLewd
Chapter 2 is currently in the process of being written, so stay tuned. I might also have plans for a third chapter...Is this leading up to a series? I can't wait to find out.
By the way, thank you all for your support and feedback :)
And that's really what this felt like. Please, continue on with seems to be a most intriguing tale.
This is good as it is but it is very quick to get to the submission being promised. There is suspense when the other teacher enters and this needs to be followed up by more. Perhaps a series would be the answer, but certainly more than one more part to the story. You just gave us a tease.
This has the makings of a truly great story so yes please continue
A whole series please. a bit less rushed. Although it was nice getting right to the point. Would love to see this develop.
Characters, Carnality and Tension race to release from starting block.
"Do we want more?" you ask.
I can hear the voices of the majority that have read this teaser.
Of course we bloody do, Loads more, the more the better, hit us with more, once more unto the pen dear scribe and then some, lets us bleed you of the chapters until you use the safe word. :-)
A 5 from me, but I wll request it back if you don't write more,................... soon!!
Congratulations, not a bad first story. Makes me wonder if perhaps you were an honors English student once upon a time with designs on your teacher. Interested to see how he "educates" her in her submission!